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9/9/20, 8:15 PM
Argh, this slow drip is driving me insane! Patience is a virtue, I guess... Please, keep it coming! Side note: one of the hottest/most interesting features of the Pollination world is the transformation process, beginning with the man finding a flower and ending with him accepting his Symbiont. I think it's one of the best parts of the story, watching a man go from initially surprised at/nervous about what's happening to enjoying the rush/growth and transformation into a muscled hulk to feeling compelled to accept his Symbiont. I've always wondered what it would look like from the perspective of the man who's experiencing it, his internal monologue, etc. Maybe that's a question for a different story, though!
Anonymous
9/9/20, 8:06 PM
Awesome so far! :) Looking forward to more
marc
9/9/20, 8:04 PM
nice beginning...looking forward to seeing where u go with this
9/9/20, 7:52 PM
@Boi982229 Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment! As I've said above, I touch on the little ways that Slaveboy must be accommodated due to his lowered intelligence in the next chapter, which I am going to post in a day or two. In a nutshell, Slaveboy is complete because his role perfectly suits him, because he was made to be perfectly suited for the role and nothing else at the wish of his Master. It's a bit neferious for all of the cute moments or hot scenes, but that's what we're here for, is it not? @The Influencer Your praise of my originality in my method of mind control are SO dear to me, I can't even properly express... I agree that there was some dragging in the end, but that's primarily because there didn't USED to be a sex scene in the chapter, but I added one because I realized that the story had called for one blatantly, and I'd previously neglected it. I have a few more chapters on the backlog, and since this one was so well recieved, I can't wait to hear what people think of the next one. @(blank) I wasn't even TRYING to get that word count, but you are quite right that it simply cannot go unremarked. Thank you for enjoying my story enough to comment.
9/9/20, 7:35 PM
this is really a new twist on the unaware genre and I'm here for it. this was a nice chapter. I was quite confused after the first one but the explanation cleared everything up and made it even more exciting
9/9/20, 7:09 PM
This is both hilarious and hot! Also, I wasn't sure if Ethan had supernaturals abilities or not, but yep, definitively magic, and he really need to understand that one of those days, or else it's gonna be one loose ass he's gonna end with. He might appreciate, though.
Anonymous
9/9/20, 7:03 PM
This is so hot! i love the locking outfit
9/9/20, 7:00 PM
Thanks a lot from your comments. @SilentNobody, the "werewolf and the nerd" it's a reference to "Nate and Dave" by Nacho. It's a very good story, a few of the happy ones on here. If you already read it, then leave Nacho a comment maybe it will help the revive the story @Heru Kane, about the third suggestion, I like more the stories where the corruption it's gradual and not a full 180° on personality. My intention it's to go full corruption but at it's time, so I thought that suggestion add some action without being to little or to much. I have some idea where I want to go with the characters (and in this introductory chapter I put some ideas of the future chapters) but I would love to read which other suggestions do you like for Bob and his sons.
9/9/20, 6:52 PM
Very hot story! I'd love to read more
9/9/20, 6:40 PM
I love the idea of this. So looking forward to seeing where this goes. I do wosh the third was a bit less specific on sucking cock so that he comes to like getting fucked and stuff. But yeah this is a nice. Also I'm quite happy to see a dom pov. They seem rare nowadays.