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marc
9/9/20, 9:16 PM
NICE WORK.......be interesting to see where u take it from here
9/9/20, 9:06 PM
I live to serve the Virus.
Anonymous
9/9/20, 8:59 PM
hot as hell! keep it up dude!
marc
9/9/20, 8:52 PM
HOT
9/9/20, 8:47 PM
> Argh, this slow drip is driving me insane! Patience is a virtue, I guess… Please, keep it coming! > I will, though once we get to the new stuff in BOOK TWO, I'll slow down to one chapter a week. > Side note: one of the hottest/most interesting features of the Pollination world is the transformation process > Agreed, though I think we only see it two or three times (completely) within these pages. As a writer, there's nothing I hate worse than "Chapter 3: the same thing happens to a third guy" -- so I work very hard to keep it original, including ways to make you, the reader, imagine it.
9/9/20, 8:17 PM
This is a really great story! I mainly enjoyed your sense of humour and I really like how you thought the whole concept into every detail. The story itself is really cute as well - you convey skillfully how much they love each other. And then they had sex! ;-)
9/9/20, 8:15 PM
Argh, this slow drip is driving me insane! Patience is a virtue, I guess... Please, keep it coming! Side note: one of the hottest/most interesting features of the Pollination world is the transformation process, beginning with the man finding a flower and ending with him accepting his Symbiont. I think it's one of the best parts of the story, watching a man go from initially surprised at/nervous about what's happening to enjoying the rush/growth and transformation into a muscled hulk to feeling compelled to accept his Symbiont. I've always wondered what it would look like from the perspective of the man who's experiencing it, his internal monologue, etc. Maybe that's a question for a different story, though!
Anonymous
9/9/20, 8:06 PM
Awesome so far! :) Looking forward to more
marc
9/9/20, 8:04 PM
nice beginning...looking forward to seeing where u go with this
9/9/20, 7:52 PM
@Boi982229 Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment! As I've said above, I touch on the little ways that Slaveboy must be accommodated due to his lowered intelligence in the next chapter, which I am going to post in a day or two. In a nutshell, Slaveboy is complete because his role perfectly suits him, because he was made to be perfectly suited for the role and nothing else at the wish of his Master. It's a bit neferious for all of the cute moments or hot scenes, but that's what we're here for, is it not? @The Influencer Your praise of my originality in my method of mind control are SO dear to me, I can't even properly express... I agree that there was some dragging in the end, but that's primarily because there didn't USED to be a sex scene in the chapter, but I added one because I realized that the story had called for one blatantly, and I'd previously neglected it. I have a few more chapters on the backlog, and since this one was so well recieved, I can't wait to hear what people think of the next one. @(blank) I wasn't even TRYING to get that word count, but you are quite right that it simply cannot go unremarked. Thank you for enjoying my story enough to comment.