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boi98229
9/9/20, 7:50 AM
My favorite aspect of Dominant/submissive stories is the process of seduction. You delivered that in spades! Like Ashton i don't really believe this level of control is possible through hypnosis. The difference between us is that i would really like to experience this depth of hypnosis/mind control not only to be thoroughly convinced, but also because the thought of giving up that level of control to a Dominant is such an incredible turn-on. Possible or not in reality, you made it come true! Thanks for the experience.
9/9/20, 7:15 AM
Nice start. Looking forward to seeing how this goes. Wouldn't mind hearing about the nerd and werewolf boyfriend too.
9/9/20, 7:15 AM
Not gonna lie, I'm starting to get happy that Alex is getting things right! I want Alex to finally stop screwing up in the end so that he can finally stop suffering from punishments. I hope thats where this story is going. Anyway, you're doing a great job and I'm glad I supported this story all the way through! I will happily follow you through on your next story!
giveintothemusk
9/9/20, 6:42 AM
Love how he's slowly starting to like it
9/9/20, 6:12 AM
I think Bob will resist but find himself seeing the sense in those suggestions. Once he sees Dan as the Alpha everything else will follow more quickly.
boi98229
9/9/20, 5:59 AM
Thanks so much for Hypnothrill's inspiration, and BateFan's taking up the baton and running with it. So looking forward to more! Hypnothrill has some interesting questions still to be answered. I am hoping to run into boy Jason, who I expect may be manning the front desk by the time I get there.
Sep 5, 2020
boi98229
9/9/20, 5:08 AM
Hey Josh, Is this just a first chapter? It's like Alice just fell down the rabbit hole, and things get strange, she sees the rabbit running off saying "No time to say hello. Goodbye. Goodbye. Goodbye.", but she never talks to anyone and nothing happens after that. The writing and situation keep the interest up, but in the end we don't know anyone or anything, and other than the transformation, nothing happens and there is no explanation. I'm just left thinking, "Huh!?"
Anonymous
9/9/20, 5:02 AM
I live to serve the Virus.
Anonymous
9/9/20, 4:57 AM
be more careful when insulting dick sizes
9/9/20, 4:48 AM
I would really love a happy ending to this! Like Aiden is gay and they put Cody in his place. Aiden and Alex become a couple.