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9/8/20, 4:31 PM
That was great dude! I especially love how long you kept him under for his last session — I’ll admit, I’ve fantasized about something similar happening to me, even before the pandemic.
Zac
9/8/20, 4:14 PM
Daaaaamn, bro! A Wrestlr story never disappoints.
9/8/20, 3:20 PM
I live to serve the Virus.
9/8/20, 3:06 PM
Great ending to a great story. I love me some good ol southern boy hypnosis!
9/8/20, 2:51 PM
Er... Delicious1papaya... It's a story. You know - made up - fiction. There is absolutely no need for you to impose any kind of morality on it. Your second comment is all about what would happen if it was 'real life'. That's the point - IT'S NOT REAL LIFE! This story is 'Pawn', the writer's, first effort and I think he's done a pretty good job of it. I bet that it has turned on quite a few readers. Negative comments like yours are not only unnecessary; they stifle creativity. Imagine if George R. R. Martin had edited his 'Game of Thrones' series to remove any morally questionable actions. It would have all been about Cersei playing with her kittens and nothing interesting would have happened. The publishers would have turned it down. In any fiction you need conflict - it's the seasoning which makes a story worth telling.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
9/8/20, 2:46 PM
I really love this relationship (& would love to be a collared part of it). You are doing a great job of breaking down resistance to where new life is being accepted. It is not possible to say what is right or wrong about this. That is another long debated topic that has been around for 50 years.
9/8/20, 2:11 PM
On a second thought, I'd also add that Cody no longer seems as the character with moral upper hand and what you're promoting with the story would actually in real life require counseling. (also, the parents would be probably liable for dereliction of duty to care for their child by now because he'd be in some serious distress as he can't feel safe nowhere and his "Master" is definitely NOT providing him with any sense of security or protection. If such a Master existed in real life BDSM, I hope the community would cast them out and intervene on behalf of the slave.
9/8/20, 2:05 PM
Well, from my perspective there is a difference between sadism when it's something mutual with a masochist that desires it and is gradually training for it as well. And then there is this insanity that you've just described in this latest chapter where the punishment no longer fits the "crime" and its only self-serving purpose is to be more scandalous than last chapter. I have to admit that last two chapters were actually more of a turn-off - as compared to earlier chapters. I guess that provides answer to which ending I'd choose. I know I'm in minority on this website...
9/8/20, 2:00 PM
i got a hard time looking for the last chapter for this path... maybe links to previous paths and currents next paths could help? anyway, even if chad is too goog guy for my I like the episode... but I wonder if joey will recall chad chamges people and maybe try something (without hurt him, since he only defend people now)... and will is gonna be satisfied with ryan or he will try to get the pendant again? maybe try to corrupt chad to be less good? anyway I just need to wait... or try help writing something 😅
9/8/20, 1:31 PM
I think that party is perhaps everyone's favorite part of the story -- it's what I get the most feedback about. I'd go if they invited me. seriously, I loved working with the senior Lenoldi. His grace and salesmanship and smooth confidence, he's become a favorite. We'll be seeing a lot more of him in Book Two.