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9/8/20, 2:05 PM
Well, from my perspective there is a difference between sadism when it's something mutual with a masochist that desires it and is gradually training for it as well. And then there is this insanity that you've just described in this latest chapter where the punishment no longer fits the "crime" and its only self-serving purpose is to be more scandalous than last chapter. I have to admit that last two chapters were actually more of a turn-off - as compared to earlier chapters. I guess that provides answer to which ending I'd choose. I know I'm in minority on this website...
9/8/20, 2:00 PM
i got a hard time looking for the last chapter for this path... maybe links to previous paths and currents next paths could help? anyway, even if chad is too goog guy for my I like the episode... but I wonder if joey will recall chad chamges people and maybe try something (without hurt him, since he only defend people now)... and will is gonna be satisfied with ryan or he will try to get the pendant again? maybe try to corrupt chad to be less good? anyway I just need to wait... or try help writing something 😅
9/8/20, 1:31 PM
I think that party is perhaps everyone's favorite part of the story -- it's what I get the most feedback about. I'd go if they invited me. seriously, I loved working with the senior Lenoldi. His grace and salesmanship and smooth confidence, he's become a favorite. We'll be seeing a lot more of him in Book Two.
9/8/20, 1:19 PM
Awesome continuation. We got further with the sexy bartender, a hot revenge scene, and more insight into how the narrator is being changed with the ring. Can’t wait for more!
9/8/20, 12:45 PM
God, I love those scenes at the Lenoldis' party!
9/8/20, 12:27 PM
> Your celebration of masculinity along with each man’s position in the male hierarchy is why I love your stories. > I do enjoy being a guy, yes. > My last name is Lane, the short wrestler is 5’6" just like me…I’m just waiting for my plant now > You're going to love the Variants, coming in Book Two...
am I right folks
9/8/20, 12:00 PM
damn who gave rona a keyboard
9/8/20, 11:31 AM
This story and it's really gorgeous very erotic and well written. To me in these stories of control and humiliation, I like to see when the victim takes a little revenge on the master. It would be very exciting for me if Alex could even for a moment get rid of the collar and take revenge on his little brother.
9/8/20, 10:38 AM
I'm thinking that experience must have inspired a scene in "Cycle Two" as well!
9/8/20, 10:32 AM
I live to serve the virus