Recent Comments

1/9/25, 4:43 AM
Oh this is gonna get juicy. Wonder if coach will bring Austin into the fold? ๐Ÿ˜
1/9/25, 3:56 AM
Great work, especially for your first time sharing! I don't think that I've seen this kind of transformation written in this precise way before, and i really really liked it. There was a fantastic progression from meeting Nick and getting to know David to the transformation, and the pacing control right through the end was really really good. Feel free to message me if you'd like any more of my thoughts, and I'm always available to do a beta read as well! Thanks for sharing <3
1/9/25, 2:24 AM
I knew this story existed! I couldn't find it anywhere else. :D
1/9/25, 1:05 AM
What a hot and good read. I was hoping for the actual sex part to be part of the story but the journey towards is hot nonetheless.

1/9/25, 2:21 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) I did try writing the sex scene a few times, but I was never happy with it. It always felt a little too... mechanical. So I left it to the reader's imagination.
1/9/25, 1:12 AM
Six more cookies, six more men to ensnare.
John
1/8/25, 11:52 PM
It was so good ๐Ÿ˜ญ I love how you describe the blank state of these sexy heroes ๐Ÿ˜ As well as the struggle of Rocky. And I really hope there will be a happy ending for both Colt and Rocky - as Iโ€™m a huge fan of happy ending too. Thank you so much for these amazing stories ๐Ÿ™

1/9/25, 12:53 AM
@John Thank you for the compliment and for reading...even more for taking time to comment! I promise, it will have a good ending...the idea for this came from loving a story...and the ending kinda ruining the characters (for me) and I was like...crap.
1/9/25, 12:40 AM
You know? I liked it. BWAAAK!

Anonymous
1/9/25, 12:42 AM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Cluck!
Alex
1/8/25, 11:08 PM
Great story. I wish I was a orc slut that was taken by every orc that wanted me until I was stretched so wide that my hole would permanently gaped open never closed always leaking orc cum. Until an orc forcibly makes me into his sex slave fucktoy bitchboi that had been castrated and injected with estrogen and silicone in my ass until it looks like two beachballs with a swollen saggy cunt for him to pounds into with wreckless abandon 24/7.
s;avethruhypno@yahoo.com
1/8/25, 10:24 PM
slave is nothing, slave is worthless. What slave will do for you is boundless. slave is nothing, slave is property. slave will always obey unconditionally. slave is nothing, slave is yours. slave will forever be just one of your whores. slave is nothing, slave is dumb. slave will honor every drop of your cum. slave is nothing, slave is nothing. slave will always be just a thing.
nycboot
1/7/25, 3:03 AM
This was amazing! I don't think I've ever read such a long chapter on this site, and it's a wonderful experience. I know I'm talking to Rocky - you absolutely know you're a good writer - but let me just confirm how fantastic this is!

1/7/25, 3:22 AM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) I wish I had a friend like Rocky! Although I feel bad for what happens to him in part 2. But Iโ€™ll make up for it! I like happy endings.

1/7/25, 3:35 AM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) And also. Thank you for the compliments. I certainly donโ€™t think Iโ€™m good at writing. Iโ€™ve worked hard on this one.

nycboot
1/7/25, 11:52 AM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) The effort shows - and I mean that on various levels: the characterization, the description, etc. One of the things often lacking in stories on this site is the long-range view: the idea that the entire narrative arc has been planned at the outset. I think it's obvious you've planned the story this way and not only does it show but it makes for a much more pleasing experience. (And thank you: I like happy endings too, particularly when it involves relationships.)

1/8/25, 10:06 PM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) Thank you. Really.