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Ozplays
9/8/20, 8:46 AM
i would like to see you ramp up the humiliation. Let him be naked driving Cody to school and any time in the car. Maybe some humiliating underwear or panties. would be great to work Aiden into the mix. i also liked the earlier comment about how to dress him for school. The clothing should get more revealing. That will really open up the taunts at school keep going!
9/8/20, 8:11 AM
Hey @CamoBrute (and anyone else who's interested): some of the characters in this story reappear in my final "Naked Fitness" story, "Naked Fitness; Will from IT": https://www.gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/213455
9/8/20, 6:44 AM
Terrific story! I HAVE to know what happened with Russ though! Please continue these!
9/8/20, 6:41 AM
i forgot, can he not ask someone to take it off? It'd be cool if his friend took it off, and he put it on his brother to get payback
9/8/20, 6:38 AM
Well done with a fantastic addition to the original. I loved how you added layers of extra detail on top of the first story to round out the characters and the descriptions of the transformations were awesome! I don't understand the first comment about names being messed up - it all made sense to me as part of the transformation.
Virus puppet
9/8/20, 6:22 AM
i like to serve the virus
9/8/20, 6:10 AM
@dreadliter - Thank you sir! I realized I'd never tried my hand at a time travel story, and I thought this might be a fun one to try. @Jay - Though you're linked to an empty author profile, I'm almost certain what your previous penname was. I'm sorry to hear of your retirement, I thought you brought an unique and interesting experience into this community. I hope that my choice of artistic expression doesn't cause you to set aside yours. As to a human author versus a robot, I can tell you that you won't likely find robots writing full stories anytime soon, and that the human spark will remain essential to prose so long as a human reads it. @Hypnothrill - I'm glad to hear you enjoyed a part of the story. The back half was absolutely essential to the themes I wanted to discuss. Those may not have been the bits that resonated most with you, but they were important to me. I'll remind anyone who finds AI assisted stories an imposition that you can block the tag for exactly that reason. I block several tags that I find unpalatable, and it's a fantastic way to streamline your GSS homepage a bit.
fishboy
9/8/20, 5:08 AM
I live to serve the virus.
Lusty Stallion
9/8/20, 4:50 AM
Thanks man. What a ride! I loved both parts
Anonymous
9/8/20, 4:41 AM
I live to serve the virus