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fishboy
9/8/20, 5:08 AM
I live to serve the virus.
Lusty Stallion
9/8/20, 4:50 AM
Thanks man. What a ride! I loved both parts
Anonymous
9/8/20, 4:41 AM
I live to serve the virus
9/8/20, 4:34 AM
I've got three chapters left. Does anyone have any thoughts on doing multiple endings (like two links in the last chapter, choose your own adventure style)? I've got one ending that I like, but another ending that's more sadistic that I also like. It feels kind of cheap to not decide on a single ending, but on the other hand some people might like to see two endings.
kidicarus002@gmail.com
9/8/20, 4:25 AM
i live to serve the virus
9/8/20, 4:21 AM
I really loved the first half of the story, which focuses on Aaron's mental and physical changes. I found the second half, with its AI-assisted sex scenes, to be kind of anticlimactic. Of course, it's important to have a little bit of sex at the end to show how Aaron's whole life now revolves around sex. But the focus of those scenes was no longer on Aaron's personality changes, which were the most important and hottest part of the story.
Jay
9/8/20, 3:38 AM
So "AI assisted" stories continue. What a disappointing - and disillusioning - trend. It's an extremely depressing lesson to learn, and one of the reasons I've retired as an author, but it's the truth, and it's never been clearer: Effort isn't rewarded, output is. And there is nothing the human author can accomplish, through any amount of blood, sweat, and tears, that can't be replicated by a robot. What a miserable thing to know.
swngbthways
9/8/20, 3:20 AM
I LOVE this series! I hope I'll be able to read what happens in six months! 😊
9/8/20, 3:06 AM
Loved it! A fun creative spin on the butterfly effect.
9/8/20, 2:45 AM
i live to serve the virus