Recent Comments

9/8/20, 1:39 AM
@Pawn: It doesnt have to be boring. You could add it as part of his humiliation, having to explain why he's wearing this ugly, tacky piece of jewelry and have he rest of his team make fun of him for it. But yeah, its not like this plot point HAS to be in the story for me, but it would've been a nice justification to have. It's okay, don't worry about, its just a next level detail that couldve added some extra depth to your story
9/8/20, 1:29 AM
@Dishrag - Weird idea, huh? Probably not, but you never know.
9/8/20, 1:03 AM
Awesome job! Love your works so much! Btw I don't think the names are messed up, instead I just think it's a great arrange!
9/8/20, 12:39 AM
excited to see this series revisited, and that the set up seems big. feel a little bad for Red, because he seems so sweet that I just wish the best for him.
Anonymous
9/8/20, 12:20 AM
I live to serve the Virus
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
9/8/20, 12:19 AM
I wish I could get rid of my body hair that easily. As far as collar goes, not every single person that sees it will comment on it. I like it as is.
9/8/20, 12:05 AM
yup. that's what I thought. much like fantasywithkinks, I thought it was vancouver with just Davies, but the introduction of plastic money, west end, all added to it. now I wonder if I've ever bumped into you before :p and the maintaining the timeline without paradox made sense. I guess I'm so used to stories where IQ/abilities goes when someone gets beefed up (guy having it all seems not that exciting unless hes evil)
nycboot
9/7/20, 11:43 PM
LOL! Once I read that the virus has infected the author of the story I burst out laughing and had an involuntary smile on until the end. In comments I make to other stories sometimes I'm pretty critical of an author's ability and I try to be encouraging (even if I feel the author has little hope). But this was so much fun and so cute - I still can't get the smile off of my face - that I offer the author great applause for being able to have so much fun. Bravo!
9/7/20, 11:35 PM
Absman, I love your celebration of masculinity. Sheriff Lane loving the thrill of dominance and trying to figure where his prey stands in the male hierarchy. The old farmer respecting the no nonsense masculinity of Murdock. And men and motorcycles...." feeling its erotic vibration against your scrotal sac, the hot-and-ready throb of pre-sex. It’s why men rode." Your celebration of masculinity along with each man's position in the male hierarchy is why I love your stories. (and so much of this story is hitting home. My last name is Lane, the short wrestler is 5'6" just like me...I'm just waiting for my plant now)
Anonymous
9/7/20, 10:56 PM
I live to serve the Virus.