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Virus puppet
9/8/20, 6:22 AM
i like to serve the virus
9/8/20, 6:10 AM
@dreadliter - Thank you sir! I realized I'd never tried my hand at a time travel story, and I thought this might be a fun one to try. @Jay - Though you're linked to an empty author profile, I'm almost certain what your previous penname was. I'm sorry to hear of your retirement, I thought you brought an unique and interesting experience into this community. I hope that my choice of artistic expression doesn't cause you to set aside yours. As to a human author versus a robot, I can tell you that you won't likely find robots writing full stories anytime soon, and that the human spark will remain essential to prose so long as a human reads it. @Hypnothrill - I'm glad to hear you enjoyed a part of the story. The back half was absolutely essential to the themes I wanted to discuss. Those may not have been the bits that resonated most with you, but they were important to me. I'll remind anyone who finds AI assisted stories an imposition that you can block the tag for exactly that reason. I block several tags that I find unpalatable, and it's a fantastic way to streamline your GSS homepage a bit.
fishboy
9/8/20, 5:08 AM
I live to serve the virus.
Lusty Stallion
9/8/20, 4:50 AM
Thanks man. What a ride! I loved both parts
Anonymous
9/8/20, 4:41 AM
I live to serve the virus
9/8/20, 4:34 AM
I've got three chapters left. Does anyone have any thoughts on doing multiple endings (like two links in the last chapter, choose your own adventure style)? I've got one ending that I like, but another ending that's more sadistic that I also like. It feels kind of cheap to not decide on a single ending, but on the other hand some people might like to see two endings.
kidicarus002@gmail.com
9/8/20, 4:25 AM
i live to serve the virus
9/8/20, 4:21 AM
I really loved the first half of the story, which focuses on Aaron's mental and physical changes. I found the second half, with its AI-assisted sex scenes, to be kind of anticlimactic. Of course, it's important to have a little bit of sex at the end to show how Aaron's whole life now revolves around sex. But the focus of those scenes was no longer on Aaron's personality changes, which were the most important and hottest part of the story.
Jay
9/8/20, 3:38 AM
So "AI assisted" stories continue. What a disappointing - and disillusioning - trend. It's an extremely depressing lesson to learn, and one of the reasons I've retired as an author, but it's the truth, and it's never been clearer: Effort isn't rewarded, output is. And there is nothing the human author can accomplish, through any amount of blood, sweat, and tears, that can't be replicated by a robot. What a miserable thing to know.
swngbthways
9/8/20, 3:20 AM
I LOVE this series! I hope I'll be able to read what happens in six months! 😊