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9/8/20, 3:06 AM
Loved it! A fun creative spin on the butterfly effect.
9/8/20, 2:45 AM
i live to serve the virus
9/8/20, 2:29 AM
Always enjoyed this story! I will avoid going back and reading the old version so I can enjoy the updated tales as they come out. Now I just need myself a big heaping help of Sheriff Lane and his titanic body! He's my favorite.
9/8/20, 1:53 AM
Really enjoyed it. I thought hopping from vignette to vignette to show the plan unfolding and hitting a variety of kinks was hot and smart. Nice job.
9/8/20, 1:39 AM
@Pawn: It doesnt have to be boring. You could add it as part of his humiliation, having to explain why he's wearing this ugly, tacky piece of jewelry and have he rest of his team make fun of him for it. But yeah, its not like this plot point HAS to be in the story for me, but it would've been a nice justification to have. It's okay, don't worry about, its just a next level detail that couldve added some extra depth to your story
9/8/20, 1:29 AM
@Dishrag - Weird idea, huh? Probably not, but you never know.
9/8/20, 1:03 AM
Awesome job! Love your works so much! Btw I don't think the names are messed up, instead I just think it's a great arrange!
9/8/20, 12:39 AM
excited to see this series revisited, and that the set up seems big. feel a little bad for Red, because he seems so sweet that I just wish the best for him.
Anonymous
9/8/20, 12:20 AM
I live to serve the Virus
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
9/8/20, 12:19 AM
I wish I could get rid of my body hair that easily. As far as collar goes, not every single person that sees it will comment on it. I like it as is.