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1/9/25, 9:35 PM
This is amazing!
Jun 20, 2019
1/9/25, 7:28 PM
I have cum back to this one a few times.
1/9/25, 7:21 PM
Nothin' better than a man coming into his own...and growing into his own pelt :wink:
1/9/25, 2:59 PM
I wonder how long it will take to see the next part. I can't wait.:satisfied:

1/9/25, 3:44 PM
@[Ozzy](/user/show/10048159) It was an ingenious strategy for the villain to make Black Eagle wear Rocky's mask. I was impressed by the cunning of the villain. However, the villain appears overly confident in his brainwashing abilities. He frequently references Colt and his family to provoke Rocky , and fails to get Black Eagle to report his mental "Rocky" flaws to the villain. This oversight provides Rocky with an opportunity to turn the situation around. If I were the villain, I would ensure that arrogance does not interfere with strategic thinking.:satisfied:

1/9/25, 5:02 PM
@[Ozzy](/user/show/10048159) Not too long. It needs to have time to be read. I’ve got a lot of the next part done where I had to cut six chapters from this to make it fit.

1/9/25, 5:02 PM
@[Ozzy](/user/show/10048159) That is the eventual downfall Of any maniacal villain. He is Obsessive and ends up making little Mistakes that end up costing him
nycboot
1/9/25, 2:40 PM
The section on Velocity Wing was a total surprise (we? or I had been led to believe Golden Eagle operated alone) - and it's a chance to have another hot induction scene. One thing (of many things) that I love about this story is that the "struggle" is not just a one-time event, but continues throughout - and I think that's among the most arousing things about a story, in particular this story, since it's so well done and since it frequently re-occurs. In a way, it's hotter than the sex scenes which don't really dwell on emotions. The internal struggles always do. It always seem like there's no way out, so I'm curious to see how are you going to find a way for the real Rocky to emerge. And I wonder: As in the stage version of Frank Wildhorn's Dracula where the female protagonist is kinda wistful about being rescued from Dracula, will some aspect of mind control stick in Rocky's mind? The writing is so wonderful and so thought out - and the small "sub-chapters" makes the reading go very fast so that it's a continuous cliff-hanger! (I actually walk away sometimes just to give myself time to absorb what's happening). Thank you so much and I look forward to more (and will have to go back and reread your other work).

1/9/25, 5:00 PM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) Velocity song is just another hero that happens to be “friends” (Rocky really isn’t friends with any of these people as his personality is a bit much) but the are “hero friends” (like work friends) and where Rocky mostly is a super hero at his college town you’d expect one in his home town too. You’ll just have to see where it goes next time. It will be shorter and set up a forth part ending.
1/9/25, 3:39 PM
The foam is sooooooooooooo appealing.
Jan 6, 2025
1/9/25, 3:36 PM
This is my favorite story after “Spin the Bottle”!
1/9/25, 7:36 AM
Thank you for not let it take ages between chapters! What a chapter, I can’t wait to see the next one. As for endings. I love bad endings so let me be the voice that goes against the popular demand. A horny voice in my brain was thinking it could be maybe colt that is the master as a fitting way to enact revenge. Who knows, looking forward to reading more soon!

1/9/25, 2:45 PM
@[Anon529373](/user/show/541335) haha.I love bad ending too.
1/8/25, 3:36 PM
I so adore the moments when Raz slips and almost lets out an honest admission. Just when I hoped Simon would understand him and they would share similar but opposing sensations of hopeless subservience. You keep edging the plot and building up the suspense. And then there's devilishly perfect Gabe...

1/9/25, 11:43 AM
@[astrologus](/user/show/1037572) I hope you will enjoy the next chapters ;)
Anonymous
1/9/25, 10:45 AM
I tried to leave a similar comment on your last story, but it looks like comments were turned off. I think you could benefit from an editor who could help with spelling and grammar errors - your writing is full of them and it makes it difficult to get into the story itself. Your sentence structure feels choppy and there’s very little flow throughout the whole piece.

1/9/25, 11:09 AM
@Anonymous I won't lie, I rush pieces and I'm not taking this site seriously, I'll most likely continue not to