Recent Comments

Willie Cici
9/7/20, 9:27 PM
The build up and the development was as hot as the sex. Keep writing. I'll read it.
Anonymous
9/7/20, 9:24 PM
You may want to go back and do some editing. The names are all screwed up.
Anonymous
9/7/20, 9:18 PM
Ain't that the f'ing truth! Love this story!!!
Anonymous
9/7/20, 9:09 PM
I live to serve the Virus.
9/7/20, 8:33 PM
I live to serve the virus.
9/7/20, 8:17 PM
I think I failed to describe the collar how I pictured it. It's really just a necklace made of leather that Alex personally can't take off. So it looks a little out of place for him but it's not like he's on his way to a leather bar or something. It's not a giant dog collar. More symbolic than literal collar. He's in school all day, I'm sure his other friends have asked about it, it's just going on off screen because it's boring. Making most people not notice it because magic probably would have worked as long as it had some kind of loophole, I'll try to think it through next time :)
Anonymous
9/7/20, 8:03 PM
i was so excited seeing another chapter got posted. please keep this series going!
Swizzington
9/7/20, 7:58 PM
I think my solution to this would have been - given that the collar is inherently magical - to have made it so that once it was on a person's body, other people would be oblivious to it, unless the master specifically points it out to them. Like the [perception filter](https://tardis.fandom.com/wiki/Perception_filter) in Doctor Who. :-) I concede that it's less humiliating that way, but also, it makes way more sense.
Duncan
9/7/20, 7:53 PM
I live to serve the virus.
Martin
9/7/20, 7:53 PM
> So like, no offense, but this story won the contest right? It’s kinda obvious by the absurd level of engagement it received. I’m not knocking the story, it was fine in my opinion (and my opinion alone) but, I mean, c’mon. No the story has not won yet. I'm pretty sure it won't win the contest either. The number of comments is *not* factoring into the end result.