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9/7/20, 8:33 PM
I live to serve the virus.
9/7/20, 8:17 PM
I think I failed to describe the collar how I pictured it. It's really just a necklace made of leather that Alex personally can't take off. So it looks a little out of place for him but it's not like he's on his way to a leather bar or something. It's not a giant dog collar. More symbolic than literal collar. He's in school all day, I'm sure his other friends have asked about it, it's just going on off screen because it's boring. Making most people not notice it because magic probably would have worked as long as it had some kind of loophole, I'll try to think it through next time :)
Anonymous
9/7/20, 8:03 PM
i was so excited seeing another chapter got posted. please keep this series going!
Swizzington
9/7/20, 7:58 PM
I think my solution to this would have been - given that the collar is inherently magical - to have made it so that once it was on a person's body, other people would be oblivious to it, unless the master specifically points it out to them. Like the [perception filter](https://tardis.fandom.com/wiki/Perception_filter) in Doctor Who. :-) I concede that it's less humiliating that way, but also, it makes way more sense.
Duncan
9/7/20, 7:53 PM
I live to serve the virus.
Martin
9/7/20, 7:53 PM
> So like, no offense, but this story won the contest right? It’s kinda obvious by the absurd level of engagement it received. I’m not knocking the story, it was fine in my opinion (and my opinion alone) but, I mean, c’mon. No the story has not won yet. I'm pretty sure it won't win the contest either. The number of comments is *not* factoring into the end result.
9/7/20, 7:43 PM
Man, this plot is so complicated!
9/7/20, 7:31 PM
Personally, I'm not a huge fan of the pubes shaving thing, I just don't like guys without any hair on their bodies. Its an huge turn off and instantly makes a guy less attractive to me, but thats just my preference and I understand you're using it as a plot point to bring in the humiliation on Alex to further break him. Anyway, I do think that Swizzington has a point, its weird that no one remarks about the collar enough on the showers. I think you did it once in one of the chapters but something so significant like that would attract so much more attention. My advice is you either have other people comment more about it and make Alex more pressured to come up with excuses for it or you make him avoid situations where the collar would be noticed. Perhaps he would avoid showering in the school altogether so that nobody asks or he wears lots of turtlenecks or something..
Anonymous
9/7/20, 7:15 PM
I live to serve the virus.
9/7/20, 6:50 PM
So hot. I want to see more of the "triplets".