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9/7/20, 5:15 PM
I live to serve the virus.
9/7/20, 4:47 PM
Another hot chapter! I like how Jake couldn't even say yes to being changed back to his straight self. He really has fallen so far!
9/7/20, 4:32 PM
A little late on the party here, but I found this story by accident and loved it! You did such a great job and it was super hot!
Anonymous
9/7/20, 4:25 PM
I live to serve the virus.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
9/7/20, 4:21 PM
Every chapter is so damned hot! I have read each one several times. I fantasize myself as Casey -- fully me, but fully and happily a real man's pet.
9/7/20, 4:01 PM
I live to serve the Virus
9/7/20, 3:58 PM
> When this story first came out, i had a friend that I had a huge crush on join the army, and I always pictured him as the jarhead that gets transformed- that fantasy has gotten me off many times in the past > For me, there is no greater compliment. Honestly, knowing my stuff has gotten you off or caused you to fantasize your own variation makes me VERY happy! I hope I continue to inspire. > hopefully he will make an appearance in Book 2 > Absolutely! I have a whole subplot waiting for those guys!
9/7/20, 3:50 PM
@FantasyWithKinks - Hopefully it was a good interesting way and not a bad one! I’ve been experimenting lately with anchoring my stories in real physical locations, as opposed to ‘kinda-but-not-really-NYC-or-maybe-Chicago’, and it’s actually really helpful in getting some of the details right. Plus I like being able to picture the exact building or the exact street. Some of it is still a composition of other places I’ve known - the grocery store for example is based on one in another city, but I don’t think it affects the story negatively. The AI assistant definitely knows what it’s doing around sex. My sex scenes are usually short and bland, whereas the ai assist tends to get into the details. One of the experiments with this story was using the AI only where it’s demonstrated strengths in my other work, while handling the parts I’m best at myself.
9/7/20, 3:30 PM
I really liked parts of this story, and I feel like the technique for spreading the "virus" was very creative. But towards the end it just started to feel *aggressively* Utopian, like it didn't trust its readers to make up their own minds about whether these changes were a good thing or not. More showing and less telling would have helped here--for instance, showing us in greater detail how people like Xander become less neurotic and judgmental and more comfortable with their own bodies.
9/7/20, 3:18 PM
Nope. Hypnothrill is right -- I've done some editing and some cleaning, but nothing big, and no new additions to Book One. It was all there the whole time, hidden in plain sight!