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1/9/25, 3:39 PM
The foam is sooooooooooooo appealing.
Jan 6, 2025
1/9/25, 3:36 PM
This is my favorite story after “Spin the Bottle”!
1/9/25, 7:36 AM
Thank you for not let it take ages between chapters! What a chapter, I can’t wait to see the next one. As for endings. I love bad endings so let me be the voice that goes against the popular demand. A horny voice in my brain was thinking it could be maybe colt that is the master as a fitting way to enact revenge. Who knows, looking forward to reading more soon!

1/9/25, 2:45 PM
@[Anon529373](/user/show/541335) haha.I love bad ending too.
1/8/25, 3:36 PM
I so adore the moments when Raz slips and almost lets out an honest admission. Just when I hoped Simon would understand him and they would share similar but opposing sensations of hopeless subservience. You keep edging the plot and building up the suspense. And then there's devilishly perfect Gabe...

1/9/25, 11:43 AM
@[astrologus](/user/show/1037572) I hope you will enjoy the next chapters ;)
Anonymous
1/9/25, 10:45 AM
I tried to leave a similar comment on your last story, but it looks like comments were turned off. I think you could benefit from an editor who could help with spelling and grammar errors - your writing is full of them and it makes it difficult to get into the story itself. Your sentence structure feels choppy and there’s very little flow throughout the whole piece.

1/9/25, 11:09 AM
@Anonymous I won't lie, I rush pieces and I'm not taking this site seriously, I'll most likely continue not to
1/9/25, 6:23 AM
Hope you give us your usual combination of fetishes. Will be great to see how you work in some of the transformation desires, like forced smoking with a mask, would love that to be a pipe or cigar.
Lampshade15
1/1/25, 4:59 PM
Fuck, this was a much better read than I expected considering I'm not really into smoking. One of the hottest stories I've read in a long time!

1/9/25, 6:18 AM
@[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649) Same here! Smoking and cigars aren't a fetish of mine but I got hard as hell reading this! Well done!
littledickslave@yahoo.com
1/9/25, 4:59 AM
There are not enough Masters around like Master Alex!
1/9/25, 4:43 AM
Oh this is gonna get juicy. Wonder if coach will bring Austin into the fold? 😏
1/9/25, 3:56 AM
Great work, especially for your first time sharing! I don't think that I've seen this kind of transformation written in this precise way before, and i really really liked it. There was a fantastic progression from meeting Nick and getting to know David to the transformation, and the pacing control right through the end was really really good. Feel free to message me if you'd like any more of my thoughts, and I'm always available to do a beta read as well! Thanks for sharing <3