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9/7/20, 3:18 PM
Nope. Hypnothrill is right -- I've done some editing and some cleaning, but nothing big, and no new additions to Book One. It was all there the whole time, hidden in plain sight!
9/7/20, 3:17 PM
would love a sequel!,
9/7/20, 3:09 PM
I don't think any of this is new, @nycboot (see https://archive2007.muscle-growth.org/stories/1717.html if you want to make comparisons). It's still VERY hot though.
nycboot
9/7/20, 3:00 PM
I've not gone back to the original version but the military involvement is totally new, yes? Your more detailed description of Bowden is wonderful. And I also like your description of how the plant is taking over Murdock (and presumably everyone else). In the original story you just had many take-overs, but now you describe what happens. Fabulous! Now I have to go relieve myself because the arousal is too much. :)
9/7/20, 2:49 PM
I live to serve the Virus
9/7/20, 2:37 PM
i always loved the part with the military. When this story first came out, i had a friend that I had a huge crush on join the army, and I always pictured him as the jarhead that gets transformed- that fantasy has gotten me off many times in the past, hopefully he will make an appearance in Book 2!
FantasyWithKinks
9/7/20, 2:26 PM
I had to take a moment to check if there was another gay Davie Street in another North American city when I started lol. For some reason, having a specific location for a story rather than Anywhere, America hit different for me. Like, I've probably been to whatever club you imagined at the end of the story. Assuming Aaron went to school in Van, I have definitely seen the buildings some of the scenes happen in. It changes the vibe of the story in a really interesting way. It's interesting to know that you used the AI assistant for some of the sex. The semi-randomness of events in the Vanilla series kind of confused me, but it's pretty clear that the assistant knows what it's doing with sex stuff. And, obviously, your awesome writing every time.
9/7/20, 2:02 PM
I really loved this series, just as I love all of your stories. The combination of Sterling, Zach, and Tony is really hot. I just wished we could see more of Sterling taking charge/Domming Tony more. Like fucking Tony while he's fucking or sixty-nining Zach, or making Tony wear a vibrating buttplug, while making him suck Sterling or Zach off while they make out with each other. I just feel that there's so much room for expanding or adding to the series. Is there going to be a addon to the series? Like a epilogue or snippet scene of how office life would be like, after the scene Applegate's questioning? That would be really, really, hot to see. Not to mention seeing how relationship between the three works, with Tony acting submissive to Sterling, while at the same time topping/taking charge of Zach, while under Sterling's lead.
9/7/20, 12:48 PM
Friends, I live to serve the Virus, so welcome to a new gay dating site: https://hypnothrill.tumblr.com/
9/7/20, 11:37 AM
Awesome! So glad that Van and Jake are back! Can't wait for more. Thanks for this... LLOYD