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9/6/20, 11:36 PM
@anon - I don't know... I'm pretty sure I made at least two butterfly effect jokes in there. Thanks for reading, it was a fun write too. @anon2 - Thank you sir! @Hypnoguy67 - Thanks man. I wrote all the plot bits by hand, though I used some AI assistance for the more sexual parts of the story. Hopefully all the changes between the time jumps are intentional, and not just the result of sloppy writing ;)
9/6/20, 11:20 PM
This Story is so BORING
9/6/20, 10:58 PM
i live to serve the Virus
9/6/20, 10:53 PM
I live to serve the virus
9/6/20, 10:38 PM
I live to serve the virus
9/6/20, 10:07 PM
I live to serve the virus
9/6/20, 10:06 PM
i live to serve the virus
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9/6/20, 9:41 PM
...we need a vaccine. But I did have to laugh at the Maximum ratings and the reveal. Fun!!
9/6/20, 9:28 PM
I love how the narrator is oblivious to the changes in himself and his bros. The attention to detail in description and plot is top-notch. Awesome writing, Derek!
9/6/20, 9:07 PM
i really liked the pacing, format and concept here. You present here a narrative transcending the 4th wall about the spreading of a virus which (unless I misread) you don't give much of a clue what it's about apart from being in our minds. There is a virus, but what does it do? What is it's goal (apart from spreading and enslaving people from the mind)? Is it Alien? Digital? Biological? Ethereal? The mystery behind that is super intriguing in my opinion! To be honest, I burst into laughter at the part where the narrative ordered to give maximum ratings (the audacity!!) but it fits the whole writing so well, that I just might cave in for that ;-) Anyway, loved this! Can't wait for the reveal to see who wrote that!