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nycboot
9/7/20, 12:04 AM
Yeah, the opening scene with Robbie Ray was just a grabber, right? It's irrelevant to the story...unless you plan to bring back air travel. (And if so, why not Mike Milano...)
9/6/20, 11:36 PM
@anon - I don't know... I'm pretty sure I made at least two butterfly effect jokes in there. Thanks for reading, it was a fun write too. @anon2 - Thank you sir! @Hypnoguy67 - Thanks man. I wrote all the plot bits by hand, though I used some AI assistance for the more sexual parts of the story. Hopefully all the changes between the time jumps are intentional, and not just the result of sloppy writing ;)
9/6/20, 11:20 PM
This Story is so BORING
9/6/20, 10:58 PM
i live to serve the Virus
9/6/20, 10:53 PM
I live to serve the virus
9/6/20, 10:38 PM
I live to serve the virus
9/6/20, 10:07 PM
I live to serve the virus
9/6/20, 10:06 PM
i live to serve the virus
Anonymous
9/6/20, 9:41 PM
...we need a vaccine. But I did have to laugh at the Maximum ratings and the reveal. Fun!!
9/6/20, 9:28 PM
I love how the narrator is oblivious to the changes in himself and his bros. The attention to detail in description and plot is top-notch. Awesome writing, Derek!