Recent Comments

Anonymous
1/9/25, 10:45 AM
I tried to leave a similar comment on your last story, but it looks like comments were turned off. I think you could benefit from an editor who could help with spelling and grammar errors - your writing is full of them and it makes it difficult to get into the story itself. Your sentence structure feels choppy and there’s very little flow throughout the whole piece.

1/9/25, 11:09 AM
@Anonymous I won't lie, I rush pieces and I'm not taking this site seriously, I'll most likely continue not to
1/9/25, 6:23 AM
Hope you give us your usual combination of fetishes. Will be great to see how you work in some of the transformation desires, like forced smoking with a mask, would love that to be a pipe or cigar.
Lampshade15
1/1/25, 4:59 PM
Fuck, this was a much better read than I expected considering I'm not really into smoking. One of the hottest stories I've read in a long time!

1/9/25, 6:18 AM
@[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649) Same here! Smoking and cigars aren't a fetish of mine but I got hard as hell reading this! Well done!
littledickslave@yahoo.com
1/9/25, 4:59 AM
There are not enough Masters around like Master Alex!
1/9/25, 4:43 AM
Oh this is gonna get juicy. Wonder if coach will bring Austin into the fold? 😏
1/9/25, 3:56 AM
Great work, especially for your first time sharing! I don't think that I've seen this kind of transformation written in this precise way before, and i really really liked it. There was a fantastic progression from meeting Nick and getting to know David to the transformation, and the pacing control right through the end was really really good. Feel free to message me if you'd like any more of my thoughts, and I'm always available to do a beta read as well! Thanks for sharing <3
1/9/25, 2:24 AM
I knew this story existed! I couldn't find it anywhere else. :D
1/9/25, 1:05 AM
What a hot and good read. I was hoping for the actual sex part to be part of the story but the journey towards is hot nonetheless.

1/9/25, 2:21 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) I did try writing the sex scene a few times, but I was never happy with it. It always felt a little too... mechanical. So I left it to the reader's imagination.
1/9/25, 1:12 AM
Six more cookies, six more men to ensnare.
John
1/8/25, 11:52 PM
It was so good 😭 I love how you describe the blank state of these sexy heroes 😍 As well as the struggle of Rocky. And I really hope there will be a happy ending for both Colt and Rocky - as I’m a huge fan of happy ending too. Thank you so much for these amazing stories πŸ™

1/9/25, 12:53 AM
@John Thank you for the compliment and for reading...even more for taking time to comment! I promise, it will have a good ending...the idea for this came from loving a story...and the ending kinda ruining the characters (for me) and I was like...crap.