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Anonymous
9/6/20, 1:07 PM
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Anon
9/6/20, 1:04 PM
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9/6/20, 1:01 PM
> Rereading it, I noticed just how short many of those scenes are. > And this chapter is the shortest in the whole series, too. > You’ve got a great way of giving us just enough tantalizing detail, then cutting away to get the reader imagine what’s happened (which can be even hotter than graphically depicting it). > That's old school horror movie technique -- if I don't show it to you, you have to imagine it yourself, which is ALWAYS infinitely greater/ worse than what would be shown. You're exactly right!
Juan
9/6/20, 12:56 PM
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9/6/20, 12:42 PM
i live to serve the virus
9/6/20, 12:40 PM
I had to re-read the first part, but damn that was hot! Great story!
Anonymous
9/6/20, 12:23 PM
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Anonymous
9/6/20, 12:18 PM
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9/6/20, 12:15 PM
This chapter has some of my favorite scenes (like Tony and his father, plus Snake and the middle-aged bikers). Rereading it, I noticed just how short many of those scenes are. You've got a great way of giving us just enough tantalizing detail, then cutting away to get the reader imagine what's happened (which can be even hotter than graphically depicting it).
9/6/20, 12:13 PM
I live to serve the virus