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9/6/20, 12:40 PM
I had to re-read the first part, but damn that was hot! Great story!
Anonymous
9/6/20, 12:23 PM
i live to serve the virus
Anonymous
9/6/20, 12:18 PM
I live to serve the virus
9/6/20, 12:15 PM
This chapter has some of my favorite scenes (like Tony and his father, plus Snake and the middle-aged bikers). Rereading it, I noticed just how short many of those scenes are. You've got a great way of giving us just enough tantalizing detail, then cutting away to get the reader imagine what's happened (which can be even hotter than graphically depicting it).
9/6/20, 12:13 PM
I live to serve the virus
9/6/20, 12:09 PM
I live to serve the virus
Anonymous
9/6/20, 12:06 PM
I live to serve the virus
9/6/20, 12:00 PM
I live to... offer critical comments, so I'll just note that I was a little bored by the induction sections, even though I thought the formatting was clever and it made sense why we were getting such a lengthy induction. But once we got to the end of the story and the narrator revealed his true identity, then it got much hotter. So fine... I live to serve the Virus
9/6/20, 11:59 AM
I live to serve the virus
Anonymous
9/6/20, 11:41 AM
i live to serve the virus