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9/5/20, 8:19 PM
> everything about this story leaves me wanting more > Don't worry -- it's barely gotten started.
Anonymous
9/5/20, 7:40 PM
I hope for more
Anonymous
9/5/20, 7:29 PM
Can we get a "Nice" in the comments on the word count alone (great story too!)
9/5/20, 6:52 PM
so good! cant wait to see what happens next
boy Jason
9/5/20, 6:03 PM
I love how you made the "wake up" trigger the bowtie and sweater and the fact that David accepted it without any conflict. I hope there might be future chapters maybe?!?!
9/5/20, 5:37 PM
itd be cool if the roles were switched eventually
9/5/20, 5:22 PM
I appreciate how you're working with different storytelling styles here, and I really want to like this, but it just isn't working for me. We get all this heavy material about the death of Sandeep's mother in the middle of this chapter; for me, that deflated the eroticism of the story, and it still didn't answer my questions about Vikram's motivations or how he has managed to somehow mind control both his son and the other men in the neighborhood.
Ozark
9/5/20, 5:22 PM
everything about this story leaves me wanting more. its so hot!
9/5/20, 4:54 PM
Make a gainer and a chubby chaser next pls .
9/5/20, 3:56 PM
this was an awesome chapter, I'm loving it.