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boy Jason
9/5/20, 6:03 PM
I love how you made the "wake up" trigger the bowtie and sweater and the fact that David accepted it without any conflict. I hope there might be future chapters maybe?!?!
9/5/20, 5:37 PM
itd be cool if the roles were switched eventually
9/5/20, 5:22 PM
I appreciate how you're working with different storytelling styles here, and I really want to like this, but it just isn't working for me. We get all this heavy material about the death of Sandeep's mother in the middle of this chapter; for me, that deflated the eroticism of the story, and it still didn't answer my questions about Vikram's motivations or how he has managed to somehow mind control both his son and the other men in the neighborhood.
Ozark
9/5/20, 5:22 PM
everything about this story leaves me wanting more. its so hot!
9/5/20, 4:54 PM
Make a gainer and a chubby chaser next pls .
9/5/20, 3:56 PM
this was an awesome chapter, I'm loving it.
9/5/20, 3:36 PM
> If anything, her inclusion adds to the realism and gives the story meaningful conflict in her vying against the efforts of her now-rogue partner. > I think what's interesting is they all view her as a threat and she has no idea of that. > I’m definitely looking forward to more of her, and discovering what her ultimate fate will be. Will she be killed? Changed in a different way? > I don't think I'll kill her. @rubbrsome did some fun work on this story and used her as a featured character -- I liked what he did, though I don't think it's "canon". I had some fun with her in Book Two and want to see her some more, too. But I really don't know anybody's final fate yet.
Gasuda
9/5/20, 12:39 PM
Personally, I feel that the inclusion of a female character, when done right, is not a bad thing in a gay sex story. If anything, her inclusion adds to the realism and gives the story meaningful conflict in her vying against the efforts of her now-rogue partner. I'm definitely looking forward to more of her, and discovering what her ultimate fate will be. Will she be killed? Changed in a different way? Allowed to remain wholly human as the world is overtaken, thus providing us with an outside perspective to the very end? This story as a whole is tantalizing in it's possibilities, as well, and I'm looking forward to reading the rest!
9/5/20, 12:09 PM
Love it so far! Awesome story! I can think of a good punishment that'll be psychological torture for Alex! Make him obsessed with Nick's dick! Whenever Nick is around he can't help thinking about his dick and wanting to suck it!
9/5/20, 11:33 AM
> This is a great story. I am looking forward to reading the other chapters. > Thank you. This is the first story I ever wrote in this genre and I think it shows, but I liked it enough to continue it -- and its sequel. Keep reading!