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boy Jason
9/5/20, 10:00 PM
I loved the entire story line, everything form the slow take over to the Preppy/Suited control (My main fetish). I was wondering if Mr. Baxton had purposely had Levi and Austin stop from showing each other any affection? To me at least, it definitly read that way. Especially at the end when they were talking about moving Levi to the guest room, its like they were just friends/roommates.
9/5/20, 9:48 PM
This chapter had me hard from the get go. I love how you made Vikram some how turn his son into a horny boi slut & also turn the rest of the neighborhood into horny daddy's. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
9/5/20, 9:14 PM
Hey Elan! I'm a long time fan of your work. This one has got me hooked in a different way than your other work. You have a great way of creating a perfect erotic scenario without a lot of exposition for whats going on, allowing us, the reader, to focus on the eroticism. However, this story shows that exposition can be just as interesting as the sexy parts. Since the last chapter I have checked the site everyday for an update and I am not disappointed at all! I love that you added more backstory for Vikram and I appreciate there is still some mystery to his exact motivations. Cant wait to see where you take this! Thank you for continuing to update. Keeps the quarantine interesting. -Braindrainboi
9/5/20, 8:19 PM
> everything about this story leaves me wanting more > Don't worry -- it's barely gotten started.
Anonymous
9/5/20, 7:40 PM
I hope for more
Anonymous
9/5/20, 7:29 PM
Can we get a "Nice" in the comments on the word count alone (great story too!)
9/5/20, 6:52 PM
so good! cant wait to see what happens next
boy Jason
9/5/20, 6:03 PM
I love how you made the "wake up" trigger the bowtie and sweater and the fact that David accepted it without any conflict. I hope there might be future chapters maybe?!?!
9/5/20, 5:37 PM
itd be cool if the roles were switched eventually
9/5/20, 5:22 PM
I appreciate how you're working with different storytelling styles here, and I really want to like this, but it just isn't working for me. We get all this heavy material about the death of Sandeep's mother in the middle of this chapter; for me, that deflated the eroticism of the story, and it still didn't answer my questions about Vikram's motivations or how he has managed to somehow mind control both his son and the other men in the neighborhood.