Recent Comments

Mark
9/5/20, 5:06 AM
Great chapter! Very excited to see what happens with Nick!
9/5/20, 5:00 AM
Desperately edging waiting for more.
boi98229
9/5/20, 4:11 AM
Hey! Thanks! Cute story in a hot kind of way. i have always questioned whether it made sense to want to dumb down a slave, since it just limited the range of things the slave is able to do for its Master. Reading your story, even though intended only as a fantasy, i now can more easily accept how that could work well and happily for both Master and slave. What you have created with magic, i fantasize about creating with various forms of mind control. Part of that common fantasy i think is the submissive's ability to focus his life happily on serving a someone he loves, respects, and/or in some other way connects with in a D/s relationship.
9/5/20, 3:48 AM
Very nice work, very creative! Totally into it.
9/5/20, 2:22 AM
I love your version of the Alice story, especially the transformation from twink to muscular alpha male. Very creative and well written! I look forward to future chapters.
9/4/20, 11:39 PM
I loved this series, and, true confessions, I loved the male pregnancy part. I too hope you write some more in this vein!
9/4/20, 11:39 PM
I'm so happy Pollination is back up! I remember first reading the OG Pollination (with Mike and Smitty) way, way, WAY back in the day. It's as hot and creative now as it was then! It's impressive that you can keep such a large cast organized over such a long story. I can't wait to see in which directions Book II branches out!
9/4/20, 11:37 PM
@Moby thanks for taking the time to comment! I'm glad you enjoyed. @(blank) thanks for the feedback, and as to your question about how Slaveboy can use recipes, well, I actually explain that in the next chapter, so... something to look forward to?
9/4/20, 9:40 PM
I'd like to remind everyone that when I wrote this I was just making it up as I went along, following threads (or branches, rather) that interested me and seeing where they went. I had no uber-plot in my head, really -- only the most vague of notions. With that in mind, Snake was never intended to become one of the main characters of this story. But in working with him, he quickly became one of my favorites and so his role has grown. (And I've known the whole time what he's going to Canada for -- which you'll see in Book Two.) Same with the rural Indiana boys. I got into the relationship between Danny and Chuckie, as well as the relationship between Tony Lenoldi and his Dad, and they soon became the central to that storyline. Watch as W.B. and Keith all but disappear from the narrative. I'm pretty good about holding together a large cast, but sometimes characters slip through.
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
9/4/20, 9:37 PM
I live to serve the Virus.