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Anonymous
9/4/20, 7:14 PM
Really great story! Loved the concept of the different colours. Only thing that gave me pause (a bit after I read) was how Slaveboy managed to learn recipies when he doesnt know what numbers are, haha. Still good tho! Your stories are always great.
Jul 23, 2019
Ron
9/4/20, 5:27 PM
Great story, please write more. Greeting slave Ron
Moby
9/4/20, 5:12 PM
This was great! Really creative too
9/4/20, 4:27 PM
Thanks! And that's the notion :) Plenty of stories to tell when your protagonist is young, exceedingly dumb, and full of cum, not to mention completely oblivious to his own hypnotic charm. I predict a lot of accidental sexual escapades in his future.
9/4/20, 3:40 PM
I live to serve the Virus.
9/4/20, 1:15 PM
This was absolutely scorching. I love the way Dustin has completely given himself over, and I can’t wait to see the fallout.
9/4/20, 11:31 AM
> Despite it having no sex and featuring a woman, I really enjoyed Tully’s chapter. Though we spent so little time with her, I feel like your writing expertly illustrated her personality such that I can see her in other situations. > Tully is a big problem for me. I went through an internal battle about including a female cast member in what is, ultimately, a gay sex story. Obviously, she's an X-Files homage, so her presence makes sense. I just don't know what to do with her in the long run. We don't see her much in Book One, but she's definitely unraveling the mystery in Book Two. I think my issue with her is that she's too good to kill off... but we'll see what I do in the end. At some point -- according to the rules of storytelling -- she HAS to confront her former partner, Wolf Murdock. > There is only one criticism I have, though, that you described her as a dullard, and she seems neither slow nor stupid. > Me? Use a word wrong? Not possible! Hahaha -- I meant to say that I think of her as lacking excitement or personality, not that's she's stupid. Perhaps the actual word "dull"?
9/4/20, 11:23 AM
Obviously we need a few more stories following the clueless Ethan! Should make for interesting reading!
9/4/20, 11:16 AM
> Definitely like this vignette style of storytelling; it reminds me of the serial books in 17th and 18th Japan minus the ad pages. > Okay, that reference predates mine! I'm using a soap-opera/ team comic-book technique, leaving the reader at a small cliff-hanger at the end of each vignette. It's a page-turning technique. It's also the only way to manage what has become a huge cast! > Looking forward to seeing what you have in store for the army unit. > Me, too!
9/4/20, 9:46 AM
thats was great!