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9/4/20, 11:23 AM
Obviously we need a few more stories following the clueless Ethan! Should make for interesting reading!
9/4/20, 11:16 AM
> Definitely like this vignette style of storytelling; it reminds me of the serial books in 17th and 18th Japan minus the ad pages. > Okay, that reference predates mine! I'm using a soap-opera/ team comic-book technique, leaving the reader at a small cliff-hanger at the end of each vignette. It's a page-turning technique. It's also the only way to manage what has become a huge cast! > Looking forward to seeing what you have in store for the army unit. > Me, too!
9/4/20, 9:46 AM
thats was great!
9/4/20, 8:50 AM
very hot, makes me want to go out for some 2am yoga...or a run heh.
Gasuda
9/4/20, 7:37 AM
Great writing as always, absman420! I remember stumbling across the Pollination comic years ago, and I'm delighted to hear that you're continuing it. Despite it having no sex and featuring a woman, I really enjoyed Tully's chapter. Though we spent so little time with her, I feel like your writing expertly illustrated her personality such that I can see her in other situations. There is only one criticism I have, though, and that's that you described her as a dullard, and she seems neither slow nor stupid. Rather, I'd say she's just no-frills and to the point. That said, I'm looking forward to seeing more of this great story be re-posted. :]
9/4/20, 4:47 AM
i cant count how many times i've re-read this story. Maybe my favorite of all time on here!
9/4/20, 4:17 AM
😢 (but well-written) (One spot of m/f "sex", despite author's note)
9/4/20, 2:59 AM
This series is available on Nifty. For a continuation from this point, start at Part 8. Note that all parts are dated 2009 -- while the story concludes nicely at Part 12, there hasn't been any activity since. https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/sf-fantasy/my-hole-has-a-mind-of-its-own/
Speaks
9/4/20, 2:16 AM
any sequel to this would be amazing. Im really curious as to how the science nerd would end up
9/4/20, 1:34 AM
This was a great chapter! I agree that the piss drinking was a nice addition to Alex's humiliation. I'm also glad that you took my advice and gave some plot progression in this chapter, now Alex has a plan! Lets see if he succeeds and I cant wait to read what happens next. Youre doing great!