Recent Comments

9/4/20, 1:34 AM
This was a great chapter! I agree that the piss drinking was a nice addition to Alex's humiliation. I'm also glad that you took my advice and gave some plot progression in this chapter, now Alex has a plan! Lets see if he succeeds and I cant wait to read what happens next. Youre doing great!
9/4/20, 1:17 AM
Wonderful new story from you! I only wish he'd also turned into an old man! ;)
9/4/20, 12:26 AM
Glad to see this back.
9/4/20, 12:16 AM
Diaper stuff has to be very well integrated with the other MC stuff for me to get into it, and you accomplished that here. Well done!
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
9/4/20, 12:07 AM
Nice addition of piss here. I wish somebody would make me a slave like that. Hopefully parents are clueless & not notice any changes.
9/3/20, 11:38 PM
Definitely like this vignette style of storytelling; it reminds me of the serial books in 17th and 18th Japan minus the ad pages. Looking forward to seeing what you have in store for the army unit.
boy Jason
9/3/20, 9:04 PM
Can I please get directions to Dicksburg and the phone number for the motel so I can make a reservation ?
9/3/20, 7:40 PM
@BateFan If you send me a draft of the next installment before you post it, I can help you "Southern fry" some of your dialogue.
9/3/20, 7:06 PM
@Hypnothrill and Malskin Noted! I suppose the reason behind that is I feel like I wouldn't be good at it? and I guess I'm not sure how even best to bring the southern accent to life. I can try in the next installment!
9/3/20, 6:57 PM
Looooved this. Great conclusion to the story!