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Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
9/3/20, 5:05 AM
I like idea of power, blackmail etc. Maybe couple video clips made with threat of going on xtube or adam4adam? Should probably gain email & other social media account access.
9/3/20, 4:36 AM
Don't be afraid to ask for some editing help from a native speaker--that's what the message board and Discord are for. Also, it would be nice to get a clearer sense of how the motel is warping the minds of its guests. The narrator's sudden decision that he wanted to shave his body seemed to come out of nowhere.
9/3/20, 4:21 AM
Kind of an interesting twist, with Alex the desk clerk still undergoing his brainwashing. But I am eager to see what happens once they finally get out of the hotel room. I especially look forward to seeing Brad's interaction with his friend Matt. One small question: I'm a little curious as to why no one in the story so far seems to be speaking with a southern accent.
Anonymous
9/3/20, 4:09 AM
excuse me but a certain philosopher from saratov would like a word with you
9/3/20, 4:00 AM
It was an awesome story! I wish there was more, especially focusing on Cody's training at the gym and how he fell under the doc's control
9/3/20, 1:33 AM
glad yo hear more to cum !
Apr 23, 2020
9/3/20, 12:14 AM
continue the story !
Lusty Stallion
9/2/20, 8:58 PM
Thanks for the encouragememt guys. I'm looking forward to seeing where this one goes too
9/2/20, 7:10 PM
> Four years ago when my CigarDADDY decided to make me his latest SMOKEpig he tied me to a chair duct taped a big maduro cigar in my mouth nip suckers on my virgin nips and this story scrolling in front of me > That is one of the most flattering things I've ever read! Super hot to know my work was part of your induction.
9/2/20, 6:30 PM
@Plymouth58 I've had a master plan all along. The pandemic had me so down that I wasn't in the mood to write The next chapter will be the end of this story but not this Universe. I've really loved writing these characters so they will, hopefully, have more adventures. I love your idea about Burro and Benji. If you're cool with it I'd totally like to explore that.