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Anonymous
9/3/20, 10:14 AM
Yeah too rushed. felt empty
9/3/20, 9:16 AM
seemed to rush for me.
Anonymous
9/3/20, 8:44 AM
what no more adventures? can we see more?
9/3/20, 8:26 AM
A great New Chapter, You can see the influence that Henry now has over Dustin, i am not sure if this is the last chapter of this story, but i would like to see a post chapter of how Dustin has changed in a previous chapter you did say its a pity your family life is over - Thanks for writing this
9/3/20, 7:44 AM
I am enjoying this greatly. I going on to the next chapter.
9/3/20, 7:33 AM
Great development in the mystery. Looking forward for it to continue.
Anonymous
9/3/20, 7:29 AM
great work
9/3/20, 6:44 AM
Potentially a really hot premise, but I felt like you were racing through the most interesting parts of the story (the app being used to take over the office and then the whole world) in order to get to the ad for your OnlyFans at the end.
9/3/20, 6:36 AM
Just read through the whole thing, and I'm loving it! Please keep going!
Martin
9/3/20, 6:33 AM
Please reformat your story, you need to add paragraph separations to make it readable. To add an paragraph break, please insert an empty line between the paragraphs!