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9/2/20, 2:13 PM
really hot
9/2/20, 1:58 PM
I’m always excited to see a truth becomes reality scene and this one didn’t disappoint. Very hot! I felt a little bad for the innocent guys getting changed. It does feel as though the narrator is slowly figuring out that the ring is changing him and that everything isn’t perfect and right. I wonder where that’s going and if it will make him take it off and stop using it? I’d like to see him get with the bartender. That sounded hot.
9/2/20, 1:36 PM
You had me hard & leaking the whole time. Great storyline but I wanted the action to last longer. Also, need to find out what happened with the other guys...more chapters?
Deltayankee
9/2/20, 1:11 PM
If you liked this story, give Cris Kane's *Mariposa* stories a look-see.
Armasar
9/2/20, 11:52 AM
Please put your amazing pictures!!
9/2/20, 10:49 AM
This is BEAUTIFUL. My heart aches for Tim. What will happen?
9/2/20, 9:54 AM
Great start! Cant wait to read the next part. Thanks!
Oct 13, 2005
Deltayankee
9/2/20, 9:37 AM
Umm ... could use some editing.
9/2/20, 8:29 AM
I hope you can make up for the guy the narrator accidentally screwed over, i agree, they did not deserved it
Anonymous
9/2/20, 7:54 AM
I liked this story a lot. The way you conveyed the absolute power fantasy is so hot.