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Oct 13, 2005
Deltayankee
9/2/20, 9:37 AM
Umm ... could use some editing.
9/2/20, 8:29 AM
I hope you can make up for the guy the narrator accidentally screwed over, i agree, they did not deserved it
Anonymous
9/2/20, 7:54 AM
I liked this story a lot. The way you conveyed the absolute power fantasy is so hot.
9/2/20, 5:00 AM
Thanks so much for the support, bmax! I know I'm a bit of a slacker in my writing...lol...I'll try to keep that up better in the future. ;-) I do have a number of ideas on mind, but sometimes it takes that spark to jumpstart the brain cells and get things going.
Anonymous
9/2/20, 3:51 AM
I loved this. Please make more
Sexcrab
9/2/20, 3:47 AM
Wow, it seems you read my text. All my compliments, reflections and criticisms are referenced in this chapter. And with high-quality Josmith narrative that we love, know and need. A organic story, with strong interactions and different voices, highly sexual, perverted at the right point and of course, full of hot and servile daddies, ready to please their owner. I don't disagree with comments above saying the final plot and the protagonist's reaction sounded Stacy's Dad a bit but... I loved. So much. All the characters voices are great for me, but my favorite was certainly Steve. A great deal of the relationship between Steve and Jake has been made. And with it, a big repair too, on both sides. I loved the way you handled that detail that used to bother me. You are truly a great writer. Please, extend this story for 13 chapters, at least. PS: In my other text, I mentioned about consequences and problems who Jake could suffer, but I didn't expect it to happen anytime soon. Obviously, in my theory, it is a false alarm. Just a bad coincidence that scared the protagonist profusely. But the unwanted attention is so "suddenly" that I think the protagonist's fear, which was only at the beginning of his sexual release and used to do everything in conformity before the space rock event, is perfectly natural.
Mark
9/2/20, 2:53 AM
Love this series!
9/2/20, 2:48 AM
This this is a really amazing story that happens to have quite a few different fun elements. I like the evolution of the humiliation and degradation, and I enjoy that it has a more neutral if not positive tone and some other stories for similar situations. I like the implied threat that exists throughout that really gives the narrative a sense of foreboding and menace. And in particular I really love the ending where Bulldog became Rumwell jr. It was a really hot scene that came out of left field but was definitely done well.
Anonymous
9/2/20, 1:01 AM
not a fan
Anonymous
9/2/20, 12:49 AM
Awful. Truly awful. Massive disgrace to the tentacle genre.