Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/2/20, 7:54 AM
I liked this story a lot. The way you conveyed the absolute power fantasy is so hot.
9/2/20, 5:00 AM
Thanks so much for the support, bmax! I know I'm a bit of a slacker in my writing...lol...I'll try to keep that up better in the future. ;-) I do have a number of ideas on mind, but sometimes it takes that spark to jumpstart the brain cells and get things going.
Anonymous
9/2/20, 3:51 AM
I loved this. Please make more
Sexcrab
9/2/20, 3:47 AM
Wow, it seems you read my text. All my compliments, reflections and criticisms are referenced in this chapter. And with high-quality Josmith narrative that we love, know and need. A organic story, with strong interactions and different voices, highly sexual, perverted at the right point and of course, full of hot and servile daddies, ready to please their owner. I don't disagree with comments above saying the final plot and the protagonist's reaction sounded Stacy's Dad a bit but... I loved. So much. All the characters voices are great for me, but my favorite was certainly Steve. A great deal of the relationship between Steve and Jake has been made. And with it, a big repair too, on both sides. I loved the way you handled that detail that used to bother me. You are truly a great writer. Please, extend this story for 13 chapters, at least. PS: In my other text, I mentioned about consequences and problems who Jake could suffer, but I didn't expect it to happen anytime soon. Obviously, in my theory, it is a false alarm. Just a bad coincidence that scared the protagonist profusely. But the unwanted attention is so "suddenly" that I think the protagonist's fear, which was only at the beginning of his sexual release and used to do everything in conformity before the space rock event, is perfectly natural.
Mark
9/2/20, 2:53 AM
Love this series!
9/2/20, 2:48 AM
This this is a really amazing story that happens to have quite a few different fun elements. I like the evolution of the humiliation and degradation, and I enjoy that it has a more neutral if not positive tone and some other stories for similar situations. I like the implied threat that exists throughout that really gives the narrative a sense of foreboding and menace. And in particular I really love the ending where Bulldog became Rumwell jr. It was a really hot scene that came out of left field but was definitely done well.
Anonymous
9/2/20, 1:01 AM
not a fan
Anonymous
9/2/20, 12:49 AM
Awful. Truly awful. Massive disgrace to the tentacle genre.
9/2/20, 12:30 AM
great chapter. Love the story and the ideas. We missed your writing. Please come back more frequently. Perhaps another story like the "takeover" of the company and control of the father and son. I forgot the name, but that is one of your best.
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
9/2/20, 12:21 AM
I really like whole new meaning of "brotherly love" here. Wish that was me being collared.