Recent Comments

9/2/20, 1:36 PM
You had me hard & leaking the whole time. Great storyline but I wanted the action to last longer. Also, need to find out what happened with the other guys...more chapters?
Deltayankee
9/2/20, 1:11 PM
If you liked this story, give Cris Kane's *Mariposa* stories a look-see.
Armasar
9/2/20, 11:52 AM
Please put your amazing pictures!!
9/2/20, 10:49 AM
This is BEAUTIFUL. My heart aches for Tim. What will happen?
9/2/20, 9:54 AM
Great start! Cant wait to read the next part. Thanks!
Oct 13, 2005
Deltayankee
9/2/20, 9:37 AM
Umm ... could use some editing.
9/2/20, 8:29 AM
I hope you can make up for the guy the narrator accidentally screwed over, i agree, they did not deserved it
Anonymous
9/2/20, 7:54 AM
I liked this story a lot. The way you conveyed the absolute power fantasy is so hot.
9/2/20, 5:00 AM
Thanks so much for the support, bmax! I know I'm a bit of a slacker in my writing...lol...I'll try to keep that up better in the future. ;-) I do have a number of ideas on mind, but sometimes it takes that spark to jumpstart the brain cells and get things going.
Anonymous
9/2/20, 3:51 AM
I loved this. Please make more