Recent Comments

Anonymous
9/1/20, 12:34 PM
Starting out, I really wanted Trent to fail and be stupid more permanently. But the way you wrote this last chapter made me cheer him on. I would love an epilogue from Zonnors POV, an inside look into his struggle. Great story, one I'll come back to again!
Aug 31, 2020
Anonymous
9/1/20, 10:22 AM
I agree with jawhite_miller. The mohawk component was cool.
9/1/20, 9:42 AM
love it! can't wait for more
9/1/20, 5:45 AM
Wow, not only was this an amazing story, I also got really invested in the world that you created. Absolutely love the transformation element - so hot. But this is so well-written that I actually really want to see more from this world. Especially would love to dive deeper into the lore of the apparitions. What's the bar like? Who is the bar owner? Congrats on a great story!
9/1/20, 5:41 AM
OMG but this story is right up my alley! I love how the Coach subverts his traditional role by making Jack a fat lethargic pig....which is so stimulating - after being surrounded by muscle hunks all day, Derek prefers his men rounder...weaker...fatter. I eagerly await the next chapter!
Elm
9/1/20, 4:30 AM
Everything has consequences. Thanks! cant wait for more!
9/1/20, 4:29 AM
Can’t wait for more chapters! I hope David comes back!
MakeMeAPigToo
9/1/20, 4:28 AM
Long time reader of yours from when I found mcstories. Been about 10 years and you haven't failed to make me cum yet! Would love more of this!!! Hope it gets nasty!!!! ;))
9/1/20, 3:26 AM
I liked the group scenes, seeing all the frat bros together under the control was a very nice and enjoyable part of the story. I, like Hypnothrill, wasn't too into the pony part of it, but I'll be looking out for part 2.
9/1/20, 2:10 AM
You made skull-fucking very tempting...great story and very descriptive writing! You are a great writer!