Recent Comments

9/1/20, 5:45 AM
Wow, not only was this an amazing story, I also got really invested in the world that you created. Absolutely love the transformation element - so hot. But this is so well-written that I actually really want to see more from this world. Especially would love to dive deeper into the lore of the apparitions. What's the bar like? Who is the bar owner? Congrats on a great story!
9/1/20, 5:41 AM
OMG but this story is right up my alley! I love how the Coach subverts his traditional role by making Jack a fat lethargic pig....which is so stimulating - after being surrounded by muscle hunks all day, Derek prefers his men rounder...weaker...fatter. I eagerly await the next chapter!
Elm
9/1/20, 4:30 AM
Everything has consequences. Thanks! cant wait for more!
9/1/20, 4:29 AM
Can’t wait for more chapters! I hope David comes back!
MakeMeAPigToo
9/1/20, 4:28 AM
Long time reader of yours from when I found mcstories. Been about 10 years and you haven't failed to make me cum yet! Would love more of this!!! Hope it gets nasty!!!! ;))
9/1/20, 3:26 AM
I liked the group scenes, seeing all the frat bros together under the control was a very nice and enjoyable part of the story. I, like Hypnothrill, wasn't too into the pony part of it, but I'll be looking out for part 2.
9/1/20, 2:10 AM
You made skull-fucking very tempting...great story and very descriptive writing! You are a great writer!
9/1/20, 2:09 AM
this was so much fun! Thank you for the happy ending! it made the whole story fun to read!
9/1/20, 2:00 AM
Totally hot! Been to the gym a lot of times and never got a top locker. Next time, I'll get dressed/undressed slowly and hopefully get a surprise. Great story, want to read more.
9/1/20, 1:54 AM
This is pretty good. Is this your first story? If it is, you did a good job! There's something nice about the simplicity to your writing, its right to the point and the pacing doesnt drag out which makes it a very fun read. Very good job again!