Recent Comments

nycboot
1/7/25, 3:03 AM
This was amazing! I don't think I've ever read such a long chapter on this site, and it's a wonderful experience. I know I'm talking to Rocky - you absolutely know you're a good writer - but let me just confirm how fantastic this is!

1/7/25, 3:22 AM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) I wish I had a friend like Rocky! Although I feel bad for what happens to him in part 2. But I’ll make up for it! I like happy endings.

1/7/25, 3:35 AM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) And also. Thank you for the compliments. I certainly don’t think I’m good at writing. I’ve worked hard on this one.

nycboot
1/7/25, 11:52 AM
@[thejazzcat](/user/show/10005285) The effort shows - and I mean that on various levels: the characterization, the description, etc. One of the things often lacking in stories on this site is the long-range view: the idea that the entire narrative arc has been planned at the outset. I think it's obvious you've planned the story this way and not only does it show but it makes for a much more pleasing experience. (And thank you: I like happy endings too, particularly when it involves relationships.)

1/8/25, 10:06 PM
@[nycboot](/user/show/131279) Thank you. Really.
1/7/25, 6:34 PM
I'll be waiting to see the (hopefully) happy ending!

1/8/25, 10:06 PM
@[Alsace-Lorraine](/user/show/908363) It will be as happy as it can be!
Anonymous
1/8/25, 5:04 PM
Well…that happened…poor Rocky…

1/8/25, 9:56 PM
@Anonymous Rocky will get his chance...eventually. Hope you enjoyed!
Bjortmon
1/8/25, 8:51 PM
So glad THE PACK IS BACK! I dig this world so much I even checked out my birth moon 🌝 Sadly, Luna did not favor me. I was born under a new moon 🌚. Dunno what that portends, but I guess it means no huge muscled Alpha wolf will be claiming me for his own. 🥲. I will just have to be happy reading the awesome tales (tails? 🤪) of the Mountain Peaks Pack.
Anonymous
1/8/25, 7:40 PM
This was so hot. Nothing gets me more than a normal athletic dude being transformed into a hockey brute.
Anonymous
1/8/25, 6:58 PM
Damn, that was awesome
1/8/25, 3:03 PM
So hot, love your story
Anonymous
1/8/25, 2:25 PM
Damn good story
1/8/25, 1:22 PM
So good Sir…..so glad you are still writing.
1/8/25, 1:03 PM
Only just found this series. Thank you for adding to it. Promises to be great.