Recent Comments

8/31/20, 8:21 AM
so i absolutely love this story! its very hot and plays with the dumbing down idea is SUCH A GREAT way. i find myself wishing it were me as i touch myself getting lost in this story. I cant wait to see how it ends up!
8/31/20, 7:21 AM
Interesting premise for a story and I'd like to join in but was wondering if there are any rules for this universe?
8/31/20, 7:19 AM
Hope you finish this story and the other! They're sooo good
8/31/20, 7:03 AM
I'm not into ponyboys or pup play or mohawks, and yet I still loved this story! You did a great job of immersing us in the world of these deeply brainwashed frat bros. I especially loved the bit with the "bro-bots" and the later scene where Brody struggles to recall his pre-brainwashing memories.
8/31/20, 5:02 AM
This chapter was the hottest! I blew so many loads I lost count. You are a terrific writer and I will definitely be reading all of your stories here. Thanks!
8/31/20, 4:39 AM
I think the story was too fast. Tbh the events in this story come right after another make me overwhelmed and there wasnt much connection between them as well. If you can extend this to 2000-4000 words it would be perfect.
MuscleSon69
8/31/20, 4:38 AM
I blew multiple loads reading this chapter! Can't wait for th next chapter to blow more!
MuscleSon69
8/31/20, 4:16 AM
I was hypnotized by the whole story! You kept me hard and leaking throughout the adventure, hanging on each word. Your are a very creative writer that takes the reader inside the story and makes him feel like he belongs there. Bravo, I want to read everything that you have written on this site. I'm so horned up I want to be hypnotized and seduced.
8/31/20, 3:36 AM
this is my very first story. Any helpful critisism's would be greatly appreciated
8/31/20, 3:19 AM
I think this is my favorite story on this site so far.