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8/30/20, 8:03 PM
Hot man!
8/30/20, 8:01 PM
Really good, love story which involves business
8/30/20, 6:45 PM
Absolutely hilarious and hot!
8/30/20, 5:39 PM
Absolutely love this chapter! I hope you continue it.
8/30/20, 5:23 PM
I totally lived it, you should continue this.
8/30/20, 4:07 PM
This will be a trilogy. I'm putting the final touches on part 2
8/30/20, 3:21 PM
Great beginning. A fun setup but far, far to short. Hopefully there are more chapters coming soon cause this was far to hot to end that quickly.
Elm
8/30/20, 1:53 PM
Well I liked this a lot, would love to see you use "Dumb Dad in his 40's" setting next :)
Mystrangetfs
8/30/20, 11:51 AM
Loved it!
8/30/20, 11:33 AM
This is a good start, but it did feel a bit rushed. I felt the direction was leading towards Nolan tried to recreate his son, only to actually fall in love with his ideal version of his son.