Recent Comments

8/30/20, 6:45 PM
Absolutely hilarious and hot!
8/30/20, 5:39 PM
Absolutely love this chapter! I hope you continue it.
8/30/20, 5:23 PM
I totally lived it, you should continue this.
8/30/20, 4:07 PM
This will be a trilogy. I'm putting the final touches on part 2
8/30/20, 3:21 PM
Great beginning. A fun setup but far, far to short. Hopefully there are more chapters coming soon cause this was far to hot to end that quickly.
Elm
8/30/20, 1:53 PM
Well I liked this a lot, would love to see you use "Dumb Dad in his 40's" setting next :)
Mystrangetfs
8/30/20, 11:51 AM
Loved it!
8/30/20, 11:33 AM
This is a good start, but it did feel a bit rushed. I felt the direction was leading towards Nolan tried to recreate his son, only to actually fall in love with his ideal version of his son.
Anonymous
8/30/20, 9:54 AM
Hell yes. Footballers should fuck like the animals they are. XD
8/30/20, 9:41 AM
I liked the world-building here, and I enjoyed the perversity of the idea that the narrator's son had been sentenced to become his permanent himbo slave. What didn't work for me was just how suddenly the narrator changed his mind; within minutes he goes from horror to wanting to rename, alter, and fuck his son. I think this part would have worked better for me if the narrator's change of heart had been stretched out over a period of days and/or the narrator himself had been under some form of mind control--for instance, what if the himbo son had been programmed to emit some form of pheromones that made him irresistible?