Recent Comments

8/29/20, 3:18 PM
I am super interested in where this is going. Love the look into the separate lives of the men and i can't wait to see what happens next.
8/29/20, 2:41 PM
The mindset scenes were great. The sex scenes wwre fantastic. The pov switches were well done. The potential plot of owning a gym is very cool. That said, the breakdown at the end was less than interesting to. Not a fan of that at all.
8/29/20, 1:50 PM
more please
Damian
8/29/20, 1:42 PM
Continue please.It can be a great story in future.
Scott
8/29/20, 1:39 PM
The idea is hot and i see its got a very big potential too it. Saying that some editing and rewording might need to be done too make it easier to read and follow seamlessly. Good luck continuing on.
8/29/20, 1:32 PM
Thanks Man, I Love!
Alex Later
8/29/20, 12:36 PM
Thanks for all the positive comments, English is not my native language, so I screwed up a bit, depending on the on-line translator, but I will definitely use Grammarly
8/29/20, 12:35 PM
I'll take that! I agreed with you back when I originally chose to finish this series, that when you give a character absolute power, there is very little that can stand in their way. That being said, a some people wanted me to continue the story, so I thought I took it in the most natural direction that I could. We got to see a few different perspectives on life post-Jafar, all the while knowing that he was going to win - it was an inevitability. But I enjoyed the ride... I'm in the process of putting together a story where a different author writes each chapter - in order to try to increase my writing skills and creativity... it'd be great to have some talented writers involved, if you're interested?
8/29/20, 12:29 PM
Oh, so that's the explanation for the hooker, good! We starting to see Jay take a bit more pro-active role, but he is still the chew toy of everyone else. Please continue, this is a really good story!