Recent Comments

8/27/20, 11:19 AM
Love this! Hope there’s more coming!
Anonymous
8/27/20, 9:13 AM
amazing! Keep going!
8/27/20, 8:56 AM
the writer had a problem with picking who was telling the story. Was it 1st person or 3rd person singular? Pick on and stick to it. I'm sure he will improve as he continues writing.
8/27/20, 8:06 AM
I like the story so far but i would love to see Trent loosing and end dump and permanent chaste :D
8/27/20, 6:30 AM
Amazing story!
8/27/20, 6:10 AM
Great story! A dream come true.
Aug 25, 2020
8/27/20, 5:58 AM
A very intriguing story! Please continue!
8/27/20, 3:35 AM
Honestly a huge fan of this story! Would love to see more! Though any story you publish will be great!
drew
8/27/20, 3:22 AM
oh my god this is an instant classic. part 2 please please please!!
8/27/20, 2:08 AM
Love how the fathers set the sons on same path. thank you! Hope to see more chapter in the future.