Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/27/20, 9:13 AM
amazing! Keep going!
8/27/20, 8:56 AM
the writer had a problem with picking who was telling the story. Was it 1st person or 3rd person singular? Pick on and stick to it. I'm sure he will improve as he continues writing.
8/27/20, 8:06 AM
I like the story so far but i would love to see Trent loosing and end dump and permanent chaste :D
8/27/20, 6:30 AM
Amazing story!
8/27/20, 6:10 AM
Great story! A dream come true.
Aug 25, 2020
8/27/20, 5:58 AM
A very intriguing story! Please continue!
8/27/20, 3:35 AM
Honestly a huge fan of this story! Would love to see more! Though any story you publish will be great!
drew
8/27/20, 3:22 AM
oh my god this is an instant classic. part 2 please please please!!
8/27/20, 2:08 AM
Love how the fathers set the sons on same path. thank you! Hope to see more chapter in the future.
8/27/20, 1:19 AM
I definitely second the disliking of Trent. Barry is being very supportive through this however, and doesn't seem half bad. Hopefully Trent will become a better person at the end of this. I am curious to see how this turns out! Keep up the great work!