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8/26/20, 7:59 AM
Amazing. i am huge fan of your work. please go on writing new stories !
Aug 25, 2020
Evan
8/26/20, 7:42 AM
Really cool idea. I liked it, it was hot. And nice to see some piss included. Very original that was the cause of the transformation and dumbing. This was an awesome first story! I hope you write more stories. I'd love to read them. Pace yourself and enjoy the telling. A little note to help your readers, make new paragraph every time someone different talks. I know it looks kind of weird but it makes it clear that the speaker has changed and easier to read so we can follow the hotness easier and really enjoy what you're telling us. Great job! Thanks for posting!
8/26/20, 4:57 AM
Loved this story. I would also like to see it with spandex. Tights would be hot. The best part was when he was asking what happened to his gains! Total bro line and I loved it.
Deltayankee
8/26/20, 2:20 AM
Excellent read! I look forward to more stories by you! (Suggest you add tag #self-suck for part 3.)
8/26/20, 1:59 AM
Eagerly awaits for whats to cum
Aug 25, 2020
Hunter_C_Wolfe@Hotmail.Com
8/25/20, 10:43 PM
Sounds like a great place to visit. Where do I sign up for a week?
8/25/20, 9:46 PM
Thank you for the comments, everyone. I'm definitely considering a sequel. Hopefully the writing in the first-person, present-tense isn't too clunky - I'm really trying to bring the reader into the experience and make him feel like he's a participant in the story, rather than just an observer. If there are places where I can improve on this please let me know!
8/25/20, 9:30 PM
Nicely done.
Martin
8/25/20, 9:15 PM
> I really enjoyed the first half with the guy on the phone. i wouldve loved to follow him as he got processed. not as into all the drag stuff though. This!