Recent Comments

8/27/20, 6:10 AM
Great story! A dream come true.
Aug 25, 2020
8/27/20, 5:58 AM
A very intriguing story! Please continue!
8/27/20, 3:35 AM
Honestly a huge fan of this story! Would love to see more! Though any story you publish will be great!
drew
8/27/20, 3:22 AM
oh my god this is an instant classic. part 2 please please please!!
8/27/20, 2:08 AM
Love how the fathers set the sons on same path. thank you! Hope to see more chapter in the future.
8/27/20, 1:19 AM
I definitely second the disliking of Trent. Barry is being very supportive through this however, and doesn't seem half bad. Hopefully Trent will become a better person at the end of this. I am curious to see how this turns out! Keep up the great work!
8/26/20, 9:50 PM
I can't describe to you how much I dislike Trent. Barry seems like a stand up guy though. Hope Trent comes through this improved.
8/26/20, 9:22 PM
@Edlam Thanks man! I love hearing that I got people hooked on it.
8/26/20, 8:18 PM
Absolutely LOVED this journey...got me checking the site daily, sometimes multiple times, waiting for the next section. Truly genius. Great work, Derek!! An instant classic.