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Aug 22, 2020
8/25/20, 6:52 AM
A fascinating start! I'm always down for a good scene that shows how a mind is broken and the fighter game with the intelligence based HP bar is brilliant! I can't wait to see what else might come about in such a universe.
8/25/20, 6:46 AM
as you say you needed to read the whole story for this chapter, liked how the lava did not burn on Hudson. My question is as i love rubber, was Smokey still wearing his rubber uniform and if so what colour was it now - like others have said like to read more if you have anything left in you to write as the ending was left open
8/25/20, 5:22 AM
Agreed that people who Instagram their brunches belong in hell. Also, I appreciated that little line at the end about why Lucifer couldn't use some of his normal powers to tempt and corrupt the mortal men he encountered.
Jockmorphr
8/25/20, 5:15 AM
@Derek Thank you for creating this amazing series. I loved reading every last chapter and enjoyed all of the fun physical transformations and mental warping. Like any fun experience I'm sorry to know that it has come to an end. But you definitely went out with a bang! I absolutely loved this chapter in particular, especially Derek's transformation and fetish. We clearly both love short, muscular guys and it was a treat to watch another one be created. The backwards baseball cap fetish was inspired and really flipped a switch for me as well. I have to ask: is it a coincidence that the the character is also named Derek?
Lusty Stallion
8/25/20, 4:52 AM
Wow man! I didn't see it coming but had noticed how many references to the devil and hell were scatteref throughout. Thank you so much for the crowd transformation of the army. I loved it! The idea of the genetal watching as his well trained and muscular straight men were transformed into gay wet dreams was so hot. So much to take in here and a series I'll be returning to. Thank you so much. Im late responding because I've been reading it in 3 gos. It was an amazing length & I just wanted to savour each section.
8/25/20, 4:44 AM
I've been saving this series, finally allowed myself to enjoy this first one. Came before we even got to the haircut, lol. Second time in a few hours. That's cool, means I can get another one in before moving on to the next story. 😈 You are nailing so many details! Barbers as orchestrators of identity. The masculine sensuality of the old school (new school? so glad this kind of place has made a comeback!) barbershop. The pleasure of the barber's touch and manipulations, the subtle submission that comes naturally with almost any haircut experience. I could go on and on. I grew mine out over the quarantine, dyed it green for kicks. Hoped I'd be able to find a San Francisco area guy who was into it to do what he chose with my hair... but social distancing took precedence despite my fantasies. Eventually it just grew to the point where it was making me feel shabby; my husband didn't feel comfortable even just clippering it into a mohawk, and I've got optic nerve damage so I can't do it myself. Just buzzed it off completely, zero crop. I guess we'll see how much longer quarantine goes and how long I can grow it out again. Excuse the digression. 🙂 The whole thing was of course at the top of my mind as I read this. I'm sure I'll enjoy your other stories just as much - you *get* it!
8/25/20, 4:27 AM
Yeeeeeeeessssss! Id be down to have the entire police force on Neil's side!
8/25/20, 3:28 AM
@mutak - You know, I didn’t intend for Joey to get flirty until he basically jumped off the page and started doing it. He’s one of my favourite characters in this whole series.
Aug 22, 2020
8/25/20, 2:46 AM
This is really good. You added in more sex which is where Swizzington’s Slave Academy series tends to lack.
8/25/20, 2:44 AM
This one is my favorite chapter so far and I finally gave a chapter in this series a "favorite". I really enjoyed the Joey flirting and sex scenes