Recent Comments

8/25/20, 12:27 PM
nice, who is next, a newbie becoming a bodybuilder?
8/25/20, 11:08 AM
It's great to see a follow up to this story and I really enjoyed this addition. Can't wait to see where you take it next!
Anonymous
8/25/20, 11:03 AM
PLEASE keep going, there's never any good chastity content in this website, this is great stuff. Especially if cumming leads to more permanent loss of intelligence over time and someone eventually decides to milk him to dumb him.
Max
8/25/20, 10:32 AM
I definitely remember uncle Ray and Mike and miss them sooooooooo much. Hope we can see them soon and their hunky partners or even the hunky chief...
Aug 23, 2020
Ng5hvlo4
8/25/20, 10:12 AM
It was an interesting short story. I am a fan of robot-like control over a subject and the scenes were hot. The element of the robot betraying the "master" was interesting but ultimately felt very strange to me/out of character for the Twink Bot company. Perhaps with additional chapters I will have a better idea of why the company abducts its own customers rather than keep the cash coming in by offering them more models.
8/25/20, 9:38 AM
wish this could continue. like the possibilities are endless. i like this infinite time better than guilded cage andbi wish it was thisbfic thta continued. the chance for world building are immense as the wish alters the family dynamics across all the world. where sons compete with each other to win there fathers love in the most intimate way. i dont know how females would fit. maybe as partnerships that may result in children but nothing more?
Aug 22, 2020
8/25/20, 6:52 AM
A fascinating start! I'm always down for a good scene that shows how a mind is broken and the fighter game with the intelligence based HP bar is brilliant! I can't wait to see what else might come about in such a universe.
8/25/20, 6:46 AM
as you say you needed to read the whole story for this chapter, liked how the lava did not burn on Hudson. My question is as i love rubber, was Smokey still wearing his rubber uniform and if so what colour was it now - like others have said like to read more if you have anything left in you to write as the ending was left open
8/25/20, 5:22 AM
Agreed that people who Instagram their brunches belong in hell. Also, I appreciated that little line at the end about why Lucifer couldn't use some of his normal powers to tempt and corrupt the mortal men he encountered.
Jockmorphr
8/25/20, 5:15 AM
@Derek Thank you for creating this amazing series. I loved reading every last chapter and enjoyed all of the fun physical transformations and mental warping. Like any fun experience I'm sorry to know that it has come to an end. But you definitely went out with a bang! I absolutely loved this chapter in particular, especially Derek's transformation and fetish. We clearly both love short, muscular guys and it was a treat to watch another one be created. The backwards baseball cap fetish was inspired and really flipped a switch for me as well. I have to ask: is it a coincidence that the the character is also named Derek?