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Lusty Stallion
8/25/20, 4:52 AM
Wow man! I didn't see it coming but had noticed how many references to the devil and hell were scatteref throughout. Thank you so much for the crowd transformation of the army. I loved it! The idea of the genetal watching as his well trained and muscular straight men were transformed into gay wet dreams was so hot. So much to take in here and a series I'll be returning to. Thank you so much. Im late responding because I've been reading it in 3 gos. It was an amazing length & I just wanted to savour each section.
8/25/20, 4:44 AM
I've been saving this series, finally allowed myself to enjoy this first one. Came before we even got to the haircut, lol. Second time in a few hours. That's cool, means I can get another one in before moving on to the next story. 😈 You are nailing so many details! Barbers as orchestrators of identity. The masculine sensuality of the old school (new school? so glad this kind of place has made a comeback!) barbershop. The pleasure of the barber's touch and manipulations, the subtle submission that comes naturally with almost any haircut experience. I could go on and on. I grew mine out over the quarantine, dyed it green for kicks. Hoped I'd be able to find a San Francisco area guy who was into it to do what he chose with my hair... but social distancing took precedence despite my fantasies. Eventually it just grew to the point where it was making me feel shabby; my husband didn't feel comfortable even just clippering it into a mohawk, and I've got optic nerve damage so I can't do it myself. Just buzzed it off completely, zero crop. I guess we'll see how much longer quarantine goes and how long I can grow it out again. Excuse the digression. 🙂 The whole thing was of course at the top of my mind as I read this. I'm sure I'll enjoy your other stories just as much - you *get* it!
8/25/20, 4:27 AM
Yeeeeeeeessssss! Id be down to have the entire police force on Neil's side!
8/25/20, 3:28 AM
@mutak - You know, I didn’t intend for Joey to get flirty until he basically jumped off the page and started doing it. He’s one of my favourite characters in this whole series.
Aug 22, 2020
8/25/20, 2:46 AM
This is really good. You added in more sex which is where Swizzington’s Slave Academy series tends to lack.
8/25/20, 2:44 AM
This one is my favorite chapter so far and I finally gave a chapter in this series a "favorite". I really enjoyed the Joey flirting and sex scenes
8/25/20, 2:24 AM
@anon - Thank you sir! @Hypnoguy67 - Yeah. It just felt like the right way to end it, showing off how everybody gets to continue in their happy kinked up lives. I don’t plan to revisit the end, but when a story starts with a stranger coming to town, it felt like the right bookend. @anon2 - Thanks for powering through. At just north of 66k words, this is the longest thing I’ve ever written. @Tempest888 - Aw thanks bro, I’m blushing. Glad you enjoyed the plot buildup, the vignettes really helped break it into distinct acts for me, and I’m stoked it worked. And don’t worry — I’ve got pizza and weed, I’m takin’ the night off.
Aug 22, 2020
8/25/20, 12:12 AM
Cool story, brainiax! Very imaginative with lots of details to put you in the scene.
8/24/20, 11:33 PM
This whole series was amazing! I know you said you used the help of an AI story generator, but this blew my expectations out the window. It was a rollercoaster from start to finish. The main thing I loved about this whole series was that it wasn't just mindless sex like the majority of the stories on here. It had a steady plot and you kept building with every chapter. I hope to see you bring back Joey in the future, if possible. Honestly, I cannot wait for your next piece, just be sure to take a break cause i'm sure it wasn't easy coming up with all of this.
Anonymous
8/24/20, 11:28 PM
This story was the best seven hours of my life. It was the only seven hours of my life! Maximum Derek!!