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Anonymous
8/24/20, 11:08 PM
wonderful
8/24/20, 9:39 PM
Love. This. Story. Please write more!
8/24/20, 9:07 PM
@MalSkin - Thanks man! I love it when I find out people are reading every day. Makes me feel like I've done my job right. There's one more chapter awaiting approval, just a little epilogue to put a bow on things and make a few of you scream at me. I wanted to portray the stranger as fundamentally a likable and good person. I think there's a lot more complexity than just 'good' and 'evil', no matter how we approach it. I strongly believe that everyone is the hero in their own story, and so from his perspective, this is a good story about making people happy and returning home. From another perspective, this would be a horror story, akin to invasion of the body snatchers.
8/24/20, 8:46 PM
Yeah I agree, the Benji cake is baked. But the frosting for me would just be to see his Daddy pick him up. Seeing his eyes light up finally meeting his daddy and to see what kinda dom Daddy is in person if hes gonna be sweet or strict. Could just be done from a different pov supervising adoption day. The way you write conditioning really hits the spot!
8/24/20, 8:23 PM
loved this series and i looked every day to see if a new chapter had been posted. Yes it was about sex and lust, but it was also i think about Good and Evil (the last chapter said that) desending into hell. Just my thought maybe the stranger could have been Good person taken over by his inner lust
8/24/20, 8:12 PM
@little tiny tim - Yup, what @Hypnothrill said. You want stories written by someone who's actually turned on by those things. Vanilla is, even at it's kinkiest, a little on the vanilla side. @Hypnothrill - Thanks man! I tried to address this with a throwaway line in the last chapter that I've just posted. The long and the short of it is that the Stranger is in desperate circumstances on earth, and he's using the tool he has at his disposal. Glad to hear it improved, I agree, those first couple chapters were rough. If I decided to bundle this up as a book, they'd need a rewrite. @Edlam - Thanks bro! We love you!
Max
8/24/20, 8:00 PM
What about cops? I love cops more, and their bare feet! When are we going to read that chapter? ^_^
Nov 26, 2019
8/24/20, 7:14 PM
well done. I like it. I've written several. I love leather and body swap looking forward to next one
8/24/20, 7:07 PM
I LOVE THIS OMG!!!
8/24/20, 6:57 PM
@little tiny tim You might have better luck if you contact an author who specializes in those kinds of fetishes and who takes commissions/Patreon requests, like Wesley Bracken. @ Derek, I think you do a great job of making us sympathize with the stranger, which is why the twist surprised me so much--I'd normally think of the devil incarnate as more sinister and devious, tempting men into sin rather than just bluntly transforming them with his armpit sweat or whatever. Still, this story's been a really sexy romp, and it's come a long way since those slightly clunky early chapters, where you were first figuring out how to co-write with the AI.